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Post #1 Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 3:07 am 
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Hey everyone.

I am just returning to the game after a long absence and was wondering if I could get a quick review of this game. When I left last time I was 10kyu.

I'm playing on KGS and I'm trying to stablise my Rank and just beat a 5Kyu. However I am sure my skill level isn't that high. Would really appreciate some guidance :)


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Post #2 Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 3:33 am 
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Welcome to the forum.

I'm not strong enough to comment, but may I suggest using the excellent SGF-tags for easier viewing:



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Post #3 Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 5:02 am 
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HaerDalis wrote:




:b11: seems too close, and :b13: really needs to be something like P15, to cut.

:b47:, :b57: and :b59: seem too close.

:b77: isn't one of the good options. B3 or D5 or even D3.

White 108 is too close. There are quite a number of mistakes in the latter part of the game.

After :b81: to :b91:, White really needed to kill a group, so should have concentrated on the lower left and top right.

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