I don’t agree with the stated necessity that
Quote:
one must
destroy the other
but … “like”.destroy the other
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Oh, and where did I read that one is a poet in the moment when they create poetry … so what?
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Tom
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| Author: | darWIN [ Wed Apr 23, 2014 8:16 am ] |
| Post subject: | Poem (sort of, I'm not a poet) |
Go Although I see your universe before me I live with the knowledge that I can only capture a little piece of you As I bare my universe before you, naked Although our minds are shared piece by piece, on the wooden board I live with the knowledge that one must destroy the other Win or lose I saw a piece of creation in you With these eyes so important to you And so meaningless to the ones with large ears But it is eyes I want, and eyes I shall have. Is that the universe Or only your reflection Staring back at you (I told you, it doesn't rhyme and it's stupid, but it's cryptic and confusing, so whatever, poem it is then. special note: I'm referring to human eyes, not go eyes.) |
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| Author: | Bonobo [ Wed Apr 23, 2014 8:52 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Poem (sort of, I'm not a poet) |
I don’t agree with the stated necessity that Quote: one must but … “like”.destroy the other <edit> Oh, and where did I read that one is a poet in the moment when they create poetry … so what? </edit> Tom
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