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Hi Ed,

Many thanks for your help, I will go through your comments carefully.

Kind regards,

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Somehow the SGF-full method doesn't work on iOS 7.x (at least not for Safari and another browser):
For the record, I saw the same thing on my Windows box.
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Hi Martin,

You're welcome. :)

For the situation around :b15: ... :b21: , please see also AGA quiz .
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Hi,

Here's another game I played earlier this morning.


It is quite representative of problems I have to develop my territory.

My feeling was that my opening was not too bad but afterwards I obviously blundered several things...

Thank you again for your help!

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Post by EdLee »

Hi Martin,

:b7: F4. See your previous game v. tent, :b15: R5, :w16: Q6 -- same local shape.

:b11: F16.

Just learn this basic shape.

:b31: N3.

:b33: Bad.

:w34: See Toothpaste and related pages.

:w36: Terrible shape for Black. See, again, Toothpaste .

:b49: S1.

:b51: Terrible, terrible. See for a 3rd reading, Toothpaste .

:w54: Q2.

:b63: C10.

:b67: Atari B12, then atari B10.
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Hi guys,

Another one, the fuse was original for me, I guess I got confused on where to play then I failed to create life resulting in a loss for me !

As this was a long game it allowed to be less stressed but I still prevented myself from reading at some point resulting in difficult scenario to manage in the end.

Many thanks in advance for your help.

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Hi guys,

Here's another game I played tonight, I'd appreciate your comments on this one:

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Some comments. You had some good basics and an overall sound opening. You lost from playing too submissively, missing some severe play and regularly missing the biggest point on the board in the middlegame and early endgame.

Is also seems that you do not know a 3-3 invasion in the shape of the bottom right corner which would have made a big difference: http://senseis.xmp.net/?44PointDiagonal ... 33Invasion

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Thank you for the review, I have well taken into consideration your remarks.

here's another one I played today: even game vs a 9kyu, I felt I could win but I made a blunder at the end...

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