Boidhre wrote:I'd like to thank Ed and Bill especially for putting up with me this last while constantly putting up games and learning so little from the reviews, or at least being able to apply so little of what they've said to me in my games.
De nada. It is all grist for the mill.
As a side point: Where you said I keep making that mistake Bill about which side to block in a 3,3 invasion: it's because really early on I was told to block on the wider side so I do it instinctively and don't account for local conditions enough when doing it. I hope, finally, the lesson has sunk in now but only time will tell.
The bottom left corner illustrates blocking on the wider side. The top right corner shows the mistake I was talking about. The mistake makes the stone inefficient and fails to separate the White stones.
¿Es claro?
Re: A beginner's journal of little interest
Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 11:39 pm
by Boidhre
Bill Spight wrote:# The bottom left corner illustrates blocking on the wider side. The top right corner shows the mistake I was talking about. The mistake makes the stone inefficient and fails to separate the White stones.
¿Es claro?
Very clear, I just never considered efficiency of stones explicitly until about a week ago.
Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 11:59 pm
by EdLee
(;CA[utf-8]GM[1]FF[4]RU[Japanese]ST[2]AP[SmartGo:2.8.3.0]SZ[19]OT[5x30 byo-yomi] GN[Aidan-Boidhre]DT[2012-05-03]PC[KGS]PB[Boidhre]BR[15k]PW[Aidan]WR[7k]KM[6.5]TM[1800.0] RE[W+18.5]MULTIGOGM[0] ;B[pd]BL[1794.2];W[dp]WL[1783.5];B[pq]BL[1782.9];W[dd]WL[1767.9];B[qk]BL[1779.1] ;W[nc]WL[1742.3];B[jp]BL[1762.7];W[qf]WL[1738.1];B[oe]BL[1760.9];W[qc]WL[1736.2] (;B[qd]BL[1745.9]C[See var.];W[pc]WL[1735.1] (;B[nd]BL[1738.9]C[See var.];W[md]WL[1732.7];B[me]BL[1734.8];W[ld]WL[1731.4];B[rc] BL[1731.7]LB[pc:a][pd:b]C[Bad habit. You like to hane 2nd line and get gote. (a) is alive. (b) is no problem. This hane+connect in gote is a mistake.] ;W[rb]WL[1729.8];B[rd]BL[1730.6]C[Gote. This probably happens in all your recent games. You need to get rid of this bad habit.] ;W[sb]WL[1723.7];B[cf]BL[1722.3];W[ch]WL[1721];B[fc]BL[1719.2];W[fd]WL[1718.5];B[gd] BL[1717.3]C[Good. You remember this basic shape.];W[fe]WL[1717];B[cc]BL[1715.4] ;W[dc]WL[1711.3];B[cd]BL[1713.9];W[de]WL[1709.6];B[bf]BL[1710.3];W[eg]WL[1705.7] ;B[jc]BL[1706.2];W[hc]WL[1704.4];B[hd]BL[1702.4];W[ic]WL[1702.7];B[id]BL[1700];W[jb] WL[1701.6];B[jd]BL[1696.5];W[kb]WL[1700.3];B[gc]BL[1694.6];W[qo]WL[1689];B[op]BL[1686.9] ;W[oo]WL[1681.8];B[no]BL[1672.6];W[np]WL[1680.6] (;B[mo]BL[1666]C[See var.];W[pp]WL[1679.3];B[oq]BL[1663.5];W[qq]WL[1678.3] (;B[qr]BL[1649]C[See var.];W[rq]WL[1672.7] (;B[mq]BL[1645.7]C[Loose. See vars.];W[pr]WL[1667.2];B[or]BL[1638.5];W[rr]WL[1665.7] C[Gote.];B[ps]BL[1637.3];W[rl]WL[1663] (;B[qh]BL[1632.1]C[See var.];W[rj]WL[1661];B[qj]BL[1613.8];W[ri]WL[1658.8];B[rh] BL[1612.2];W[qi]WL[1657.6];B[pi]BL[1611.1];W[rk]WL[1649.9];B[oh]BL[1608.4];W[pj] WL[1647.7] (;B[pk]BL[1591]C[See var.];W[oj]WL[1646.6];B[on]BL[1575.3];W[ok]WL[1641.3];B[pm] BL[1571.5];W[pl]WL[1639.7];B[ol]BL[1564.9];W[ql]WL[1638.4];B[fq]BL[1549.6];W[dn] WL[1632.5];B[dr]BL[1544.2];W[cq]WL[1631.3];B[cj]BL[1515.1];W[cl]WL[1626.7];B[bh] BL[1512.5];W[bi]WL[1622.8];B[ci]BL[1508.9];W[bg]WL[1621.7];B[dh]BL[1507.4];W[ah] WL[1618.6];B[dg]BL[1506.1];W[bj]WL[1616.7];B[di]BL[1499.5];W[gg]WL[1614.7];B[ig] BL[1491.5];W[fi]WL[1613];B[fo]BL[1473.9];W[fm]WL[1609.4];B[kf]BL[1457.5];W[hn]WL[1601.8] ;B[gm]BL[1444];W[gn]WL[1599.6];B[fn]BL[1441.2];W[em]WL[1597.6];B[gl]BL[1439.7];W[jm] WL[1594.9];B[im]BL[1425.6];W[hm]WL[1590.1];B[hl]BL[1424.1];W[in]WL[1588.9];B[il] BL[1422.7];W[jn]WL[1587.9];B[kk]BL[1400.6];W[nl]WL[1585];B[om]BL[1398.1];W[ll]WL[1582.8] ;B[kl]BL[1387];W[km]WL[1581.4];B[lk]BL[1385.5];W[ml]WL[1579.1] (;B[mm]BL[1367.2];W[lm]WL[1577];B[nk]BL[1345];W[mk]WL[1575.9];B[nj]BL[1343.4];W[oi] WL[1574.8];B[ph]BL[1340.2];W[mi]WL[1572.9];B[nh]BL[1322.2];W[ni]WL[1571.7];B[ko] BL[1294.5];W[hp]WL[1569.3];B[hq]BL[1292.1];W[gq]WL[1566.7];B[gp]BL[1290.2];W[iq] WL[1565.4];B[gr]BL[1288.5];W[ip]WL[1564.3];B[ir]BL[1285.2];W[jq]WL[1563.4];B[kq] BL[1282.3];W[jr]WL[1562.5];B[kr]BL[1275.8];W[is]WL[1559.6];B[hr]BL[1274];W[ks]WL[1558.8] ;B[cr]BL[1261.6];W[br]WL[1557.1];B[gj]BL[1252.9];W[ej]WL[1551.1];B[db]BL[1243];W[eb] WL[1546.7];B[cb]BL[1233.3];W[ec]WL[1545.1];B[gi]BL[1213.8];W[ga]WL[1526.1];B[mh] BL[1164.6];W[li]WL[1519.8];B[ki]BL[1158.3];W[lh]WL[1517.8];B[lg]BL[1156.1];W[kh] WL[1516.9];B[jh]BL[1154.9];W[kj]WL[1515.1];B[ji]BL[1151.6];W[jj]WL[1514.3];B[lj] BL[1143.9];W[jl]WL[1512.5];B[jk]BL[1142.8];W[mj]WL[1510.8];B[ik]BL[1141.3];W[fk] WL[1507.2];B[gk]BL[1138.5];W[fj]WL[1506.1];B[gh]BL[1135.3];W[fh]WL[1504.8];B[hg] BL[1130.4];W[gf]WL[1503.2];B[fl]BL[1114];W[el]WL[1501.6];B[ck]BL[1101.6];W[bk]WL[1500] ;B[dk]BL[1099.3];W[ek]WL[1498];B[dl]BL[1096.8];W[dm]WL[1494.2];B[df]BL[1094.6];W[ef] WL[1492.3];B[ce]BL[1092.5];W[ij]WL[1483.5];B[ii]BL[1075.7];W[kg]WL[1477.9];B[jg] BL[1072];W[lf]WL[1476.8];B[mg]BL[1068.8];W[le]WL[1468.3];B[mf]BL[1046.4];W[oc]WL[1462.9] ;B[od]BL[1044.8];W[hf]WL[1450.7];B[if]BL[1034.1];W[ke]WL[1448.9];B[jf]BL[1028.8] ;W[je]WL[1446.8];B[ie]BL[1027.6];W[gb]WL[1445.1];B[fb]BL[1010.1];W[fa]WL[1443.6] ;B[hj]BL[1007.1];W[kc]WL[1440.7];B[eo]BL[998.1];W[do]WL[1437.7];B[ep]BL[996.5];W[sh] WL[1435.2];B[sg]BL[994];W[si]WL[1434.1];B[rg]BL[992.2];W[dq]WL[1431.4];B[er]BL[988.7] ;W[eq]WL[1425.7];B[go]BL[970.2];W[jo]WL[1422.3];B[kp]BL[967.7];W[ho]WL[1421.3];B[ln] BL[961.6];W[nm]WL[1418.7];B[nn]BL[953.2];W[mn]WL[1416.9];B[hs]BL[935.1];W[js]WL[1414.3] ;B[mm]BL[933.5];W[po]WL[1412.6];B[qm]BL[892.2];W[rm]WL[1410.5];B[qn]BL[890.5];W[rn] WL[1409.1];B[rs]BL[879.8];W[sr]WL[1400.7];B[kn]BL[855.9];W[ls]WL[1395.8];B[ms]BL[853.1] ;W[lr]WL[1394.3];B[mr]BL[851.8];W[lq]WL[1393.2];B[lp]BL[850.2];W[mn]WL[1389.6];B[hb] BL[831.3];W[ib]WL[1387.6];B[mm]BL[829.2];W[sc]WL[1380];B[sd]BL[811.9];W[kd]WL[1368.7] ;B[bs]BL[792.6];W[ar]WL[1365.9];B[mn]BL[771.6];W[bq]WL[1362.4];B[da]BL[749.8];W[ea] WL[1357.5];B[af]BL[747.7];W[ag]WL[1355.1];B[cg]BL[744];W[bh]WL[1353.8];B[]BL[711.7] ;W[as]WL[1345.2];B[cs]BL[709.9];W[ss]WL[1343.6];B[qs]BL[708.3];W[]WL[1343.6];B[] BL[708.3]TB[of][pg][hh][ih][ij][hk][lo][fp][mp][gq][nq][fr][pr][ds][gs][os][aa] [ca][ne][pe]TW[ha][hb][lb][lc][ed][ff][ai][nj][qj][sj][pk][bl][cm][io][ro][qp]) (;B[lm];W[ln];B[mm];W[mn];B[nm];W[nn];B[po];W[jl];B[jk];W[ik])) (;B[oj];W[pk];B[ok];W[ql]C[Give up the 2 useless stones.])) (;B[rk]C[Block.];W[ql];B[pl];W[pm];B[om]C[Double hane.])) (;B[on]C[Make W a dumpling shape first.];W[po];B[mp]C[Tight.]) (;B[mp]C[Locally you want this atari -- tight -- the net in the game is loose.])) (;B[on];W[po]C[Make W a dumpling shape first.])) (;B[po];W[on];B[pn]TR[oo][on][qo]SQ[po][pn]C[Broken shape for W.])) (;B[md])) (;B[cn]))
Re: A beginner's journal of little interest
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 12:14 am
by Boidhre
Thanks Ed, what do you mean by tight and loose?
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 12:17 am
by EdLee
Boidhre wrote:Thanks Ed, what do you mean by tight and loose?
Good quesiton. Things to consider: liberties (yours and your opponent's), sente moves (yours and your opponent's), good and bad aji. Maybe you can compare the two moves here as an exercise.
Re:
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 12:42 am
by Boidhre
EdLee wrote:
Boidhre wrote:Thanks Ed, what do you mean by tight and loose?
Good quesiton. Things to consider: liberties (yours and your opponent's), sente moves (yours and your opponent's), good and bad aji. Maybe you can compare the two moves here as an exercise.
Hmm. The atari starts the ladder if they decide to nobi and effectively reduces the stone to one liberty. The net leaves it with two liberties and my group to the right with only one more. The net leaves a ko threat, so does the ladder I suppose but a lesser one. Aji, well I don't really understand that at all.
It's however two moves to kill the stone with the net and one with the atari which might be the difference between good and bad aji? I'm pretty tired so I could be all kinds of wrong here!
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 1:15 am
by EdLee
You're doing fine. If you have Kageyama's Lessons in the Fundamentals of Go, it's in there somewhere. (I have it, but not with me at the moment, so I cannot provide the page number. )
The net also leaves 2 peeps for W.
Boidhre wrote:Aji, well I don't really understand that at all.
Think funny business.
Re: A beginner's journal of little interest
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 3:06 am
by hermitek
My try at reviewing your last game. I think that your fuseki is fine, trying to spot big moves is reasonable although you could work on it a bit. Especially try to focus on not doing "passing moves" and playing more games/doing tsumegos so that your reading ability improves a bit. But you are very strong 15k. :-)
http://hermitek.net/baduk/Aidan-Boidhre.sgf
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 4:39 am
by EdLee
hermitek,
Some feedback for you (and Boidhre ),
(;CA[utf-8]OT[5x30 byo-yomi]GM[1]FF[4]ST[2]AP[CGoban:3]SZ[19]RU[Japanese]GN[Aidan-Boidhre] DT[2012-05-03]PC[KGS]PB[Boidhre]BR[15k]PW[Aidan]WR[7k]KM[6.5]TM[1800]RE[W+18.5] MULTIGOGM[0] ;B[pd]BL[1794.2];W[dp]WL[1783.5];B[pq]BL[1782.9];W[dd]WL[1767.9];B[qk]BL[1779.1] ;W[nc]WL[1742.3];B[jp]BL[1762.7];W[qf]WL[1738.1];B[oe]BL[1760.9];W[qc]WL[1736.2] ;B[qd]BL[1745.9];W[pc]WL[1735.1] (;B[nd]BL[1738.9];W[md]WL[1732.7];B[me]BL[1734.8];W[ld]WL[1731.4]C[hermitek. well played
E. Why is this well played? B pushes from behind, forcing W to take a lot of territory. See var at Move 13.] ;B[rc]BL[1731.7];W[rb]WL[1729.8];B[rd]BL[1730.6];W[sb]WL[1723.7];B[cf]BL[1722.3] ;W[ch]WL[1721];B[fc]BL[1719.2];W[fd]WL[1718.5];B[gd]BL[1717.3]C[hermitek. you want to separate F16 from M16 group and destroy potential of white there, nice idea
E. No, you misunderstand. This hane is a basic shape.] ;W[fe]WL[1717];B[cc]BL[1715.4]LB[gd:a][fe:b]C[hermitek. and now you want the corner, (a) is sad about it
E. No, it is not. This a correct sequence for B. The (a)-(b) exchange is correct for B, whether or not B wants 3-3.]) (;B[md]C[Shape. B jumps ahead of W.];W[nd];B[ne];W[me];B[ld]C[If W pushes and cuts, B fights.]))
Re:
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 5:06 am
by hermitek
EdLee wrote:hermitek,[hide]Some feedback for you (and Boidhre ),
sequence to move 13: In the game black has big moyo on the right side with almost no weaknesses in the top right. And although it could've been maybe executed a bit better, the idea and result was imho very good. In your variant after b M16 and w N14 black has to worry about M16 stones and since there is white stone at R14, black group at P15 isn't really strong either.
move 27: OK.
Re: Re:
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 6:11 am
by topazg
hermitek wrote:
EdLee wrote:hermitek,[hide]Some feedback for you (and Boidhre ),
sequence to move 13: In the game black has big moyo on the right side with almost no weaknesses in the top right. And although it could've been maybe executed a bit better, the idea and result was imho very good. In your variant after b M16 and w N14 black has to worry about M16 stones and since there is white stone at R14, black group at P15 isn't really strong either.
move 27: OK.
Some food for thought on Ed's move 13 sequence.
In the game variation, Black allows White to get onto the 4th line and starts pushing him from behind - sure, it keeps a good wall facing the right hand side, but not only has White got very reasonable territory, the D16 stone allows White to expand nicely along the top edge.
In Ed's variation, White's attempt to resist gives Black a little more complications to consider, but gives White at least as many. Firstly, White's corner is a lot smaller, and secondly, White's N15 stone risks becoming a burden. If he extends to N14, Black can play P13 (O13 instead may be ok to resist White responding wO13 bP12 wN11, but it does allow for cut complications, and White's simply securing 5th line territory for Black anyway, so Black can't complain). Now, after bP13, White not only has to look after N15 else Black's moyo potential grows considerably (and so doesn't have time to play K16/K17), but he also has to accept that with once Black settles across the top, White has no development potential and no weak Black groups to harrass.
I'd certainly play Ed's variation every time
Re: A beginner's journal of little interest
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 9:17 am
by Boidhre
Very interesting everybody, thanks.
Re: A beginner's journal of little interest
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 10:15 am
by Bill Spight
Your games are like potato chips. You can't comment on just one.
(;GM[1]SZ[19]CA[UTF-8]FF[4]AP[GOWrite:2.2.21]ST[2]WR[7k]GN[Aidan-Boidhre]RU[Japanese]PM[0]BR[15k]KM[6.5]PC[The KGS Go Server at http\://www.gokgs.com/]OT[5x30 byo-yomi]PW[Aidan]RE[W+18.50]FG[259:]DT[2012-05-03]PB[Boidhre]TM[1800.0] ;C[Aidan \[7k\]\: hi Boidhre \[15k\]\: good luck, have fun \:) Aidan \[7k\]\: gg and good luck ]B[pd]BL[1794.2] ;W[dp]C[Aidan \[7k\]\: ASR League ]WL[1783.5] ;B[pq]BL[1782.9] ;W[dd]WL[1767.9] ;B[qk]BL[1779.1] ;W[nc]C[*** A little history of the Chinese opening. Early on, White played at Q-05, to try to punish the extension at R-09. For a while that seemed to work out OK, but then Black learned to make the game a fighting game and it looks like that play is premature. Overlapping with that is this approach on the top side. Now, I think, a play on the bottom side is more popular.]WL[1742.3] ( ;C[*** I like the spirit of this play, but see variation.]B[jp]BL[1762.7] ;W[qf]C[*** This gives Black a real dilemma. Because B5 is too far away for a pincer, neither attachment looks attracitive. ]WL[1738.1] ;C[*** Why not?]B[oe]BL[1760.9] ;W[qc]WL[1736.2] ( ;C[*** Because White has room to make an extension on the right side, this move is questionable. See variation.]B[qd]BL[1745.9] ;W[pc]WL[1735.1] ( ;C[*** Fred Seki. See variations.]B[nd]BL[1738.9] ;W[md]WL[1732.7] ;B[me]BL[1734.8] ;W[ld]WL[1731.4] ( ;C[*** See variation.]B[rc]BL[1731.7] ;W[rb]WL[1729.8] ;B[rd]BL[1730.6] ;W[sb]WL[1723.7] ;B[cf]BL[1722.3] ;W[ch]WL[1721.0] ;B[fc]BL[1719.2] ;W[fd]WL[1718.5] ( ;C[*** The one space pincer is a special case. This is not joseki. See variation.]B[gd]BL[1717.3] ;W[fe]WL[1717.0] ;B[cc]BL[1715.4] ( ;W[dc]C[*** See variation.]WL[1711.3] ;B[cd]BL[1713.9] ;W[de]WL[1709.6] ;B[bf]BL[1710.3] ;W[eg]C[*** This looks like joseki, except for the marked stones. They plainly favor Black. If White had already had the wall, he would have pincered Black instead of responding passively. White has shot himself in the foot.]WL[1705.7]CR[fc][gd][fd][fe] ( ;C[*** I like the spirit of this play, because it aims at White's weakness. The two Black stones on the left are expendable. However, upon reflection, . . . See variation.]B[jc]BL[1706.2] ;W[hc]WL[1704.4] ;B[hd]BL[1702.4] ;W[ic]WL[1702.7] ;B[id]BL[1700.0] ;W[jb]WL[1701.6] ( ;C[*** See variation.]B[jd]BL[1696.5] ;W[kb]WL[1700.3] ( ;C[*** Not so big, since White is strong on both sides, and can play in between to threaten the Black corner. See variation.]B[gc]BL[1694.6] ;W[qo]WL[1689.0] ( ;C[*** See variation. End of comments.]B[op]BL[1686.9] ;W[oo]WL[1681.8] ;B[no]BL[1672.6] ;W[np]WL[1680.6] ;B[mo]BL[1666.0] ;W[pp]WL[1679.3] ;B[oq]BL[1663.5] ;W[qq]WL[1678.3] ;B[qr]BL[1649.0] ;W[rq]WL[1672.7] ;B[mq]BL[1645.7] ;W[pr]WL[1667.2] ;B[or]BL[1638.5] ;W[rr]WL[1665.7] ;B[ps]BL[1637.3] ;W[rl]WL[1663.0] ;B[qh]BL[1632.1] ;W[rj]WL[1661.0] ;B[qj]BL[1613.8] ;W[ri]WL[1658.8] ;B[rh]BL[1612.2] ;W[qi]WL[1657.6] ;B[pi]BL[1611.1] ;W[rk]WL[1649.9] ;B[oh]BL[1608.4] ;W[pj]WL[1647.7] ;B[pk]BL[1591.0] ;W[oj]WL[1646.6] ;B[on]BL[1575.3] ;W[ok]WL[1641.3] ;B[pm]BL[1571.5] ;W[pl]WL[1639.7] ;B[ol]BL[1564.9] ;W[ql]WL[1638.4] ;B[fq]BL[1549.6] ;W[dn]WL[1632.5] ;B[dr]BL[1544.2] ;W[cq]WL[1631.3] ;B[cj]BL[1515.1] ;W[cl]WL[1626.7] ;B[bh]BL[1512.5] ;W[bi]WL[1622.8] ;B[ci]BL[1508.9] ;W[bg]WL[1621.7] ;B[dh]BL[1507.4] ;W[ah]WL[1618.6] ;B[dg]BL[1506.1] ;W[bj]WL[1616.7] ;B[di]BL[1499.5] ;W[gg]WL[1614.7] ;B[ig]BL[1491.5] ;W[fi]WL[1613.0] ;B[fo]BL[1473.9] ;W[fm]WL[1609.4] ;B[kf]BL[1457.5] ;W[hn]WL[1601.8] ;B[gm]BL[1444.0] ;W[gn]WL[1599.6] ;B[fn]BL[1441.2] ;W[em]WL[1597.6] ;B[gl]BL[1439.7] ;W[jm]WL[1594.9] ;B[im]BL[1425.6] ;W[hm]WL[1590.1] ;B[hl]BL[1424.1] ;W[in]WL[1588.9] ;B[il]BL[1422.7] ;W[jn]WL[1587.9] ;B[kk]BL[1400.6] ;W[nl]WL[1585.0] ;B[om]BL[1398.1] ;W[ll]WL[1582.8] ;B[kl]BL[1387.0] ;W[km]WL[1581.4] ;B[lk]BL[1385.5] ;W[ml]WL[1579.1] ( ;B[mm]BL[1367.2] ;W[lm]WL[1577.0] ;B[nk]BL[1345.0] ;W[mk]WL[1575.9] ;B[nj]BL[1343.4] ;W[oi]WL[1574.8] ;B[ph]BL[1340.2] ;W[mi]WL[1572.9] ;B[nh]BL[1322.2] ;W[ni]WL[1571.7] ;B[ko]BL[1294.5] ;W[hp]WL[1569.3] ;B[hq]BL[1292.1] ;W[gq]WL[1566.7] ;B[gp]BL[1290.2] ;W[iq]WL[1565.4] ;B[gr]BL[1288.5] ;W[ip]WL[1564.3] ;B[ir]BL[1285.2] ;W[jq]WL[1563.4] ;B[kq]BL[1282.3] ;W[jr]WL[1562.5] ;B[kr]BL[1275.8] ;W[is]WL[1559.6] ;B[hr]BL[1274.0] ;W[ks]WL[1558.8] ;B[cr]BL[1261.6] ;W[br]WL[1557.1] ;B[gj]BL[1252.9] ;W[ej]WL[1551.1] ;B[db]BL[1243.0] ;W[eb]WL[1546.7] ;B[cb]BL[1233.3] ;W[ec]WL[1545.1] ;B[gi]BL[1213.8] ;W[ga]WL[1526.1] ;B[mh]BL[1164.6] ;W[li]WL[1519.8] ;B[ki]BL[1158.3] ;W[lh]WL[1517.8] ;B[lg]BL[1156.1] ;W[kh]WL[1516.9] ;B[jh]BL[1154.9] ;W[kj]WL[1515.1] ;B[ji]BL[1151.6] ;W[jj]WL[1514.3] ;B[lj]BL[1143.9] ;W[jl]WL[1512.5] ;B[jk]BL[1142.8] ;W[mj]WL[1510.8] ;B[ik]BL[1141.3] ;W[fk]WL[1507.2] ;B[gk]BL[1138.5] ;W[fj]WL[1506.1] ;B[gh]BL[1135.3] ;W[fh]WL[1504.8] ;B[hg]BL[1130.4] ;W[gf]WL[1503.2] ;B[fl]BL[1114.0] ;W[el]WL[1501.6] ;B[ck]BL[1101.6] ;W[bk]WL[1500.0] ;B[dk]BL[1099.3] ;W[ek]WL[1498.0] ;B[dl]BL[1096.8] ;W[dm]WL[1494.2] ;B[df]BL[1094.6] ;W[ef]WL[1492.3] ;B[ce]BL[1092.5] ;W[ij]WL[1483.5] ;B[ii]BL[1075.7] ;W[kg]WL[1477.9] ;B[jg]BL[1072.0] ;W[lf]WL[1476.8] ;B[mg]BL[1068.8] ;W[le]WL[1468.3] ;B[mf]BL[1046.4] ;W[oc]WL[1462.9] ;B[od]BL[1044.8] ;W[hf]WL[1450.7] ;B[if]BL[1034.1] ;W[ke]WL[1448.9] ;B[jf]BL[1028.8] ;W[je]WL[1446.8] ;B[ie]BL[1027.6] ;W[gb]WL[1445.1] ;B[fb]BL[1010.1] ;W[fa]WL[1443.6] ;B[hj]BL[1007.1] ;W[kc]WL[1440.7] ;B[eo]BL[998.1] ;W[do]WL[1437.7] ;B[ep]BL[996.5] ;W[sh]WL[1435.2] ;B[sg]BL[994.0] ;W[si]WL[1434.1] ;B[rg]BL[992.2] ;W[dq]WL[1431.4] ;B[er]BL[988.7] ;W[eq]WL[1425.7] ;B[go]BL[970.2] ;W[jo]WL[1422.3] ;B[kp]BL[967.7] ;W[ho]WL[1421.3] ;B[ln]BL[961.6] ;W[nm]WL[1418.7] ;B[nn]BL[953.2] ;W[mn]WL[1416.9] ;B[hs]BL[935.1] ;W[js]WL[1414.3] ;B[mm]BL[933.5] ;W[po]WL[1412.6] ;B[qm]BL[892.2] ;W[rm]WL[1410.5] ;B[qn]BL[890.5] ;W[rn]WL[1409.1] ;B[rs]BL[879.8] ;W[sr]WL[1400.7] ;B[kn]BL[855.9] ;W[ls]WL[1395.8] ;B[ms]BL[853.1] ;W[lr]WL[1394.3] ;B[mr]BL[851.8] ;W[lq]WL[1393.2] ;B[lp]BL[850.2] ;W[mn]WL[1389.6] ;B[hb]BL[831.3] ;W[ib]WL[1387.6] ;B[mm]BL[829.2] ;W[sc]WL[1380.0] ;B[sd]BL[811.9] ;W[kd]WL[1368.7] ;B[bs]BL[792.6] ;W[ar]WL[1365.9] ;B[mn]BL[771.6] ;W[bq]WL[1362.4] ;B[da]BL[749.8] ;W[ea]WL[1357.5] ;B[af]BL[747.7] ;W[ag]WL[1355.1] ;B[cg]BL[744.0] ;W[bh]WL[1353.8] ;B[tt]BL[711.7] ;W[as]WL[1345.2] ;B[cs]BL[709.9] ;W[ss]WL[1343.6] ;B[qs]BL[708.3] ;W[tt]WL[1343.6] ;C[Aidan \[7k\]\: good game Aidan \[7k\]\: thanks for the very good game Boidhre \[15k\]\: thank you, I enjoyed that \:) Vinivici \[?\]\: Heya Aidan! Aidan \[7k\]\: review? ]B[tt]TW[ai:ak][al:bl][am:cp][aq][ed:ee][ff:fg][ha:sa][hb][io][lb:qb][lc:mc][nj:nk][pk:qk][qj][qp:sp][ro:so][sj:sn][sq]BL[708.3]TB[aa:ca][ab:be][ds:gs][fp][fr][gq][hh:ih][hi][hk][ij:kj][lo][mp:np][ne][nf:sf][ng:qg][nq:nr][ns:os][pe:se][pr] ) ( ;B[lm] ;W[ln] ;B[mm] ;W[mn] ;B[nm] ;W[nn] ;B[po] ;W[jl] ;B[jk] ;W[ik] )
) ( ;B[oc] ;W[ob] ;B[od] ;W[mb] ;C[***Thou preparest a table before me, in the presence of mine enemies. Black has a base and room to expand towards the right. See continuation.]B[ic] ;W[gc]C[*** This cut does not work. ] ;C[*** Ladder.]B[gb] )
) ( ;W[ec] ;B[cd] ;W[gc]C[*** See continuation for why this is not joseki.] ;W[be]C[*** With the one space pincer this is an immediate threat.] )
) ( ;C[***This is sente for both players now. Bigger than it looks.]B[oc] ;W[ob] ;C[*** No ko in the opening.]B[od] ;W[mb] ( ;B[rc] ;W[rb] ;C[*** Black has bad shape, and avoids further bad shape.]B[rd] ;W[pj]C[*** Not that White will play this now, but the White stone is far from dead.] ) ( ;B[pg] ;W[rd] ;B[re] ;W[rc]C[*** If Black plays this way he should tenuki. Otherwise he is overconcentrated.] )
)
) ( ;C[*** Joseki.]B[md] ;W[nd] ;B[ne] ;W[me]C[*** Let the games begin!] ;B[mc] ;W[mb] ;B[lb] ;W[nb] ;B[kd] ;W[le] ;B[jc] ;W[og] ;B[ng] ;W[od] ;B[pe] ;W[nf] ;B[pg] ;W[oh] ;B[re] ;W[rc] ;B[of] ;W[mf] ;C[*** One possibility.]B[qg] )
( ;C[*** Avoids the complexities of the fight.]B[me] ;W[od] ;C[*** But Black makes bad shape.]B[pe] )
) ( ;C[*** The idea of B9 - W10, tenuki, originated, I think, with Maeda Nobuaki in the 1970s, part of what he called the Ultra strategy. It has caught on. Ed's idea of this approach is interesting, as it puts some pressure on White, but any approach to one of the left side corners is probably fine.]B[cn] )
) ( ;C[*** After this simple reply, B5 is very nicely placed.]B[pf] )
)
Re: A beginner's journal of little interest
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 11:27 am
by Boidhre
Thanks Bill, plenty to think about there.
Re: A beginner's journal of little interest
Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 12:30 pm
by mitsun
Continuing from where Bill left off ...
absolutely must be atari at P6. This move gains B a lot of strength in the center and messes up W shape. If W allows B to capture, the game is over, so it is certainly sente. Do not miss important moves like this! If you take away just one lesson from this game, this is it. is very passive. The B wall above is quite strong, and you should try to use it to the fullest extent possible. S9 or R8 would be a positive approach, boldly staking a claim a large territory. The game move settles for much less than you have earned. is a huge blunder, completely reversing the balance of strength in the center. This is a game loser, incomparably larger than the few points from the captured stones. and the follow-up connection underneath with B12 is a great high level move, congratulations for spotting it! (Although the direct cut at D14 would also be good, given the weakness of the W group above.) unfortunately was too timid, missing the big picture. You can treat the stones at C10-C11 lightly, as W has already answered them submissively, so if W later cuts at D11, giving them up is not so big. Now is the perfect time to attack the weak W group above! Look at moves like F11 or F12 or G13, which really put W on the spot.