My thoughts on the game:
7: Wierd approach F16/17 is more usual. This isn't horrible but is gote.
9:A general rule is don't attach to weak stones attack them more indirectly in this case N/O17 encloses the corner while attacking OR J17 builds a base while attacking but does mean the natural response for white is a corner approach and a base builder.
18: See my Study journal thread for a fantastic explanation of 3-3 invasions with and without the approach stone by Chew, Marcus, Redundant and Judicata (link in signature, starts on page 2)
32: This is a shoulder hit you almost always respond by extending into the stone like so:
$$c Position at move x
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$$ | . . . 1 2 . . . .
$$ | . . . , W . . . .
$$ | . . . . . . . . .
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[go]$$c Position at move x
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$$ | . . . . . . . . .
$$ | . . . . . . . . .
$$ | . . . 1 2 . . . .
$$ | . . . , W . . . .
$$ | . . . . . . . . .[/go]
43: F18 is a better move to fight for the corner and G17 is better for giving up and building a basse on the outside your move creates a weak group and a dead group here for you.
54:This is an elephants jump. Never do it (it is horrible shape) and almost alway cut it when someone else does it.
$$c Position at move x
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$$ | . . . . . . . . .
$$ | . . . . . . . . .
$$ | . . . B . . . . .
$$ | . . . , 2 . . . .
$$ | . . . . . 1 . . .
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[go]$$c Position at move x
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$$ | . . . . . . . . .
$$ | . . . B . . . . .
$$ | . . . , 2 . . . .
$$ | . . . . . 1 . . .[/go]
69: and again.
71: Just build a base you move does nothing to settle and little to escape. C5 builds a base and if it works the whites F6 group starts looking very attackable.
73:E9 or F8 to start connecting is better. You will need to sacrifice something here or risk losing it all you have weak groups everywhere and most move that save a group help white attack the other.
82: Look at what happened here perfectly natural moves here and pretty much the but result you could hope for from the invasion but you have practically forced white to attack the C8 + E7 stones, take away the base from from the G4 stones and reinforce his own F5 stones and he gets to do all this in sente.
94:Here is where the game ends to my mind this sequence is what I mean about saving the one group forces white to attack the other. The left side is cut off and in horrible shape to make eyes and white has a way into your massive framework moyo on the right.
Those are my thoughts on the game... obviously my rank of 11k should act as a caveat. Anything I say could be wrong... except the bit about elephant jumps that stuff is gospel.