Move 7: This looks too small. I don't know the joseki from the ogeima - or even if it is joseki - but it just feels wrong.
Early in the game, a player should be making sure that his groups are either safe with eye space or easy running room, or light enough to be expendable. ( For a nice example of this by a 6D, see
http://www.lifein19x19.com/forum/viewto ... 140#p61140. Note that all of white's stones are either single stones that can be abandoned at little cost, or have the beginnings of eye shape. )
Toward this end, 1-space extensions are usually made only in the corner where space is tight. Along the side, extensions are usually 2 spaces or more.
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[go]$$Bc
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With move 7, you are making your group heavy enough that it can't be easily abandoned, yet you are not really getting eye space. He demonstrates that fact with the obvious move 8 at 'a'.
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[go]$$Bc
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If you want to go for eye space in the corner, 'b' looks ok. Extensions to 'c' or 'd' look best. And, given that you have a stone in the lower left corner, a chinese-ish play at 'e' or even 'f' might not be unreasonable.
Move 15: As the twig is bent, so grows the tree. You're committed to your tiny 1-space extension, and when you build on it, you are getting way over-crowded.
You have this shape ( with the skeleton provided by the original 1-space extension circled ):
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[go]$$B
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...but you would much prefer this shape:
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[go]$$B
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...or even this:
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[go]$$B
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Moves 19 and 21: The decendants of the 1-space jump are alive and ...uhh...not well. You have played 7 stones and barely have 3 or 4 points if white plays first. Indeed it is not immediately clear that black has two eyes in the face of a determined white attack.
Moves 49 and 65: The overcrowding continues. There are nine stones getting maybe seven points. The overconcentrated shape is a direct result of move 7.
Ok, I'm done abusing move 7.

Let's look at other stuff.
Move 31: He has invaded your framework. You have a strong 3-stone group at the left and a single stone to the right. When attacking, you want to force him toward your strength, right? H3 or G4 looks better here.
Move 33: Again, this forces him away from your strength, and allows him eye space that he desperately wants. Instead, K3 would really crowd him. Next is maybe K3, J4, J5 ( you get the hane at the head of two stones ) and you are getting the beginnings of big territory in the lower right.