Sol,
I've owned a business with multiple employees for over 25 years now. I've interviewed more people than I can count.
My comments may seem brutal, but they are made in the hope that you will go out there with the best possible resume, and get the job you want.
Joaz
some hypothetical employer wrote:Give me one name, not two. Yes, I can see that you are Korean, because you are sitting on the other side of the desk, but I probably don't care.
If I am curious about your Korean name, I'll ask. But otherwise, keep it simple for me. Use one name, preferably one that I can pronounce. Don't give me a chance to embarrass myself by trying to pronounce your name and doing it badly. I'll irrationally resent you for my failing.
Switch the employer heading and job heading. Make the job the more prominent of the two. My primary concern is what you did, not where you did it, because I am wondering what you can do for me.
Unless you worked for something really prestigious, like the Rand corp, don't feature it. Remember, to me, my company is the most important one in the world. I don't care about the others. I have a limited attention span. Don't bury me in details that I don't need.
Get rid of the Asian characters ( unless the job requires knowing another language. ) One of my biggest problems with employees – after those who drink/drug on the job, and those who steal – is those who cannot communicate. Don't leave me wondering if you think that writing in foreign characters is a way to communicate with me.
Skip the paragraph about go. I've never heard of it, and I have no idea how complex it is, so I won't be suitably impressed by your accomplishments. All this tells me is that you play games. Games are for kids. I already have employees who play games, and they do it on company time, and I hate that.
GPA?? Unless is it really high, get rid of it. If you mean 3.0 on a 4.0 scale, I'm not impressed. Lots of your competitors will have numbers better than that. Don't give me an easy way to compare you to them unless you will come out ahead in the comparison.
Kifu? WTF is a kifu? Again, show me that you can communicate. Either I have to admit that I don't know something - which makes me look bad, or I have to assume that you are a poor communicator. Both are bad for you.
Label it 'board game recognition program', and tell me that it 'Generates a digital game record from a scanned image.' If I care about board games like go or chess, I'll ask which game.
About the visual layout: remember that my eyes are NOT like a 20-something's eyes. I need more white space. And I resent the fact that you youngsters can see better than I, so when I have trouble reading your resume, I'll resent you for making me feel old. Use the room saved by eliminating the paragraph about teaching go, and spread it between the other sections.
Also, as I said, I want people who can communicate, and sometimes that will mean communicating in writing.
Lastly, keep in mind that I have at least twenty applicants for every position – maybe several hundred. I can't possibly consider them all in depth. Therefore, my first pass through the pile will be an elimination pass. I will want to get rid of 80% to 90% of them so I can get a manageable pile. I'll use simple criteria: this guy can't spell, that person had a low GPA, this guy will play games at work, etc.
So don't give me simple ways to make a trivial negative judgement about you.