John Fairbairn wrote:In Robert case he will start with axioms and his resulting definition
This approach I use as a rules and definition theory researcher. In my books, I omit the low levels of axioms and formal definitions of "strategy" and "force" but explain the high level parts useful for interested players.
another view is to ask how his definition accords with Oriental practice and does it include every nuance they see.
Wait and see...:)
His axiomatic, list-based presentations
I use different approaches in rules research and my strategy books. The books can have lists indeed such as 20 reasons / criteria of when to play elsewhere. These I do not derive from axioms though but from definitions. For example, one criterion can be: "locally there are no urgent moves". I have defined "urgency" earlier in the book so that 1) this strategic concept is understood well in itself and 2) application is better understood. E.g., it is easier to apply "there are no urgent moves" if one already knows what "urgent" is.
no doubt appeal to some. They don't appeal to me
It is your horror to know what is "urgent" before applying it in a criterion like "locally there are no urgent moves". Are you sure? Of course, it is also possible to read the criteria for playing elsewhere first and then come back to the strategic concept of urgency. You seem to say though that you'd rather prefer to never ever hear a) the criterion and b) a definition / explanation of what "urgency" actually is. Happy confusion with "big" versus "urgent" moves then!:)
and I have an impression that for a wider audience he needs a co-worker who can translate his lists into more palatable form.
Rather readers rejecting the idea of being told what "urgent" is and that "locally there are no urgent moves" can be a very useful criterion for playing elsewhere should ask themselves whether they want to improve. Had I rejected the idea of learning from Akira Ishida what "overconcentrated" is, I might still be a 5 kyu.
However, there is a possibility that his definitions can be weaker in a more serious way. Flow or rhythm (I'm guessing that we are talking about choshi here) is often mentioned in Japanese as the mark of a very classy player. I have even seen it mentioned as the sign of a 6-dan amateur (if using it regularly in an unprompted way, not merely understanding a specific example). That would bring it within Robert's range, but it would seem to be on the outer fringes of his go competence. I sense from what he says above that he certainly understands the concept but whether he has mastered it is an open question. If he has not mastered it, he may have overlooked reasons why it should be brought within the compass of his method instead of being dismissed as too abstract.
It is possible that "flow" might have more meaning that I have overlooked. It is wrong though to imply that my definitions (of many other terms) would be weaker. (In fact, they are often much stronger than any definition attempt by others). Concerning "flow", currently it is nothing but a nebulous, pretended concept. The strongest usage I have ever heard was Saijo's comment on a game: "Follow the flow of the game like water!" He did not and could not explain that though. The association with water gave me at least a principle idea though: Water flows to the deepest sink. In Western theory speech, this might be translated as "Always choose to play the move having the highest temperature (aka value) first!" Why then would one need to stick to "flow" astrology, when one has clearly understood values? Superfluous!
in commentaries it tends to be reserved for those aimed at higher level players, so it is clearly not a trivial concept,
Comparing values before making decisions is an ability often learned only by 4d+. So if "flow" does mean something like that and as long as value theory remains another mystery in typical teaching, it is no surprise that only high dans get at least the gist of it.
and the frequency with which it is mentioned makes me sceptical that it can be dismissed as easily as he suggests.
Knowing which is the most valuable move (supposedly aka the move best following the flow of the game) is not just frequently but always very important. However, I dismiss alchemistic phrases for what can be expressed clearly instead.
That is why I think choshi is a good test of the "good pro/lousy teacher" versus "lousy amateur/good teacher" dichotomy.
The good (amateur) teacher uses terms that he can and does explain. A bad (professional) teacher uses terms that he cannot and does not explain. Teaching ability does not distinguish amateur from professional!
once it has been played, far from dropping the temperature locally, it raises it.
See, even you, who claims to reject such formal concepts, draws a connection between flow and temperature...!
Perhaps we can look forward to this in Robert's Book 3.
Rather vol. 2, which has all the strategic concepts. Vol. 3 will be more in the variations field.