after playing couple games after a long brake this is the game that interest me the most.. as my rank strangely boost up so would someone analyze/review the game for me? i hope i got good lesson from this game
Ades/Me (W) vs (B)
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 7:14 am
by EdLee
The game was Ades, W, 11k, versus AKANE44111, B, 12k.
Your username here is glyps, which is neither. 11k and 12k are very close.
Were you Ades ? You want to think about from the audience's (forum members' ) perspective: we don't know whether you were B or W. Just like we learn from Go, you want to also think from the other person's perspective.
(;CA[utf-8]RU[Japanese]OT[5x30 byo-yomi]GM[1]FF[4]AP[CGoban:3]SZ[19]ST[2]DT[2014-03-24] PC[KGS]PB[AKANE44111]BR[12k]PW[Ades]WR[11k]KM[0.5]TM[1500]RE[W+6.5]MULTIGOGM[0] ;B[cp]BL[1497.71];W[pd]WL[1485.58];B[cd]BL[1494.89];W[pp]WL[1481.74];B[dj]BL[1492.28] ;W[ep]WL[1479.21];B[en]BL[1483.28] (;W[dq]WL[1466.81]C[See var.];B[eo]BL[1470.82];W[hp]WL[1458.4];B[lq]BL[1465.83] ;W[nq]WL[1455.91];B[ip]BL[1462.19];W[iq]WL[1454.03];B[jp]BL[1459.63];W[jq]WL[1452.48] ;B[kp]BL[1457.78] (;W[kq]WL[1448.66]C[Bad habit. Your hit yourself on the head. See var.] (;B[mp]BL[1455.13]LB[lr:a]C[Wrong shape. This allows W to connect under with (a). See var.] (;W[np]WL[1443.48]C[See also var.];B[mo]BL[1450.52]LB[lr:a]C[W can still connect with (a).] ;W[ed]WL[1438.84];B[dg]BL[1446.68] (;W[dc]WL[1428.04]C[Wrong shape. See var.];B[cc]BL[1442.05];W[jd]WL[1425.97];B[dp] BL[1440.22];W[fp]WL[1415.41];B[cq]BL[1436.5];W[dr]WL[1412.4];B[pj]BL[1434.12];W[qn] WL[1406.69];B[qm]BL[1432.25];W[pm]WL[1402.4];B[ql]BL[1429.35];W[pl]WL[1400.56] (;B[qg]BL[1427.51]C[See var.] (;W[qe]WL[1396.03]C[See also var.];B[rf]BL[1424.54];W[re]WL[1383.75];B[rn]BL[1422.36] ;W[qo]WL[1378.56];B[ro]BL[1419.98];W[rp]WL[1377.33];B[pk]BL[1418.76];W[so]WL[1360.43] ;B[rm]BL[1414.98];W[dl]WL[1331.74];B[ck]BL[1410.3];W[cm]WL[1308.13];B[no]BL[1408.16] ;W[oo]WL[1306.28];B[on]BL[1404.71];W[pn]WL[1303.61];B[nn]BL[1402.05];W[co]WL[1286.14] ;B[do]BL[1396.76];W[bo]WL[1278.03];B[cr]BL[1393.8];W[aq]WL[1266.81];B[fo]BL[1391.74] ;W[go]WL[1264.81];B[gn]BL[1384.32];W[hn]WL[1259.69];B[gm]BL[1380.1];W[fl]WL[1257.49] ;B[hm]BL[1376.9];W[in]WL[1248.25];B[gl]BL[1371.57];W[fk]WL[1243.13];B[im]BL[1368.47] ;W[jm]WL[1241.7];B[md]BL[1365.21];W[nc]WL[1225.06];B[mc]BL[1360.75];W[mb]WL[1218.82] ;B[nd]BL[1358.14];W[oc]WL[1215.45];B[lb]BL[1355.37];W[nb]WL[1204.43];B[kc]BL[1351.89] ;W[ld]WL[1200.54];B[lc]BL[1349.37];W[of]WL[1195.55];B[kd]BL[1346.03];W[le]WL[1193.14] ;B[ke]BL[1343.84];W[lf]WL[1190.93];B[jc]BL[1341.06];W[id]WL[1189.14];B[ic]BL[1338.4] ;W[hc]WL[1187.49];B[od]BL[1335.85];W[pe]WL[1181.71];B[kf]BL[1332.23];W[kg]WL[1180.15] ;B[jf]BL[1327.61];W[ib]WL[1175.53];B[lg]BL[1324.81];W[mf]WL[1172.79];B[jg]BL[1320.89] ;W[kh]WL[1170.88];B[hf]BL[1317.91];W[ff]WL[1165.9];B[hd]BL[1314.77];W[he]WL[1162.42] ;B[gd]BL[1306.88];W[ge]WL[1161.37];B[gc]BL[1304];W[hb]WL[1159.72];B[ie]BL[1301.04] ;W[gb]WL[1144.59];B[fe]BL[1294.55];W[gf]WL[1142.21];B[fd]BL[1289.51];W[fc]WL[1135.03] ;B[ee]BL[1285.63];W[de]WL[1133.15];B[ef]BL[1282.11];W[hg]WL[1130.09];B[if]BL[1278.93] ;W[gg]WL[1125.9];B[dd]BL[1274.98];W[ec]WL[1124.02];B[ce]BL[1271.51];W[eg]WL[1117.28] ;B[df]BL[1268.82];W[dh]WL[1113.29];B[eh]BL[1264.66];W[gi]WL[1106.24];B[fg]BL[1261.87] ;W[ei]WL[1102.3];B[di]BL[1257.96];W[ch]WL[1100.25];B[fi]BL[1254.15];W[ej]WL[1097.77] ;B[ci]BL[1246.62];W[fj]WL[1090.14];B[fh]BL[1242.1];W[gh]WL[1088.33];B[eg]BL[1239.41] ;W[dk]WL[1082.36];B[bi]BL[1234.58];W[bk]WL[1077.06];B[bh]BL[1229.77];W[cl]WL[1073.13] ;B[cj]BL[1226.73];W[sf]WL[1034.96];B[sg]BL[1221.98];W[se]WL[1032.79];B[qf]BL[1219.27] ;W[qi]WL[1022.12];B[ri]BL[1216.36];W[rh]WL[1020.02];B[pi]BL[1209.29];W[rg]WL[1016.44] ;B[qh]BL[1206.08];W[sh]WL[1014.33];B[si]BL[1202.51];W[sg]WL[1012.84];B[qj]BL[1199.81] ;W[sn]WL[1008.68];B[sm]BL[1196.6];W[sp]WL[1007.37];B[jl]BL[1191.44];W[km]WL[1004.65] ;B[ml]BL[1187.65];W[kl]WL[1002.44];B[jk]BL[1184.68];W[ji]WL[997.761];B[kk]BL[1181.26] ;W[lk]WL[996.219];B[ll]BL[1177.86];W[mm]WL[989.682];B[nm]BL[1174.56];W[lm]WL[985.439] ;B[nk]BL[1170.92];W[lj]WL[983.898];B[jn]BL[1163.75];W[kn]WL[979.829];B[jo]BL[1160.3] ;W[ol]WL[961.91];B[nl]BL[1157.42];W[ok]WL[960.728];B[oj]BL[1154.46];W[nj]WL[959.286] ;B[mn]BL[1152.83];W[nh]WL[953.189];B[oh]BL[1149.27];W[og]WL[951.226];B[pg]BL[1146.58] ;W[ni]WL[925.004];B[oi]BL[1143.31];W[aj]WL[908.717];B[ai]BL[1138.33];W[bf]WL[904.926] ;B[cg]BL[1134.35];W[cb]WL[898.597];B[bb]BL[1131.14];W[da]WL[894.84];B[jb]BL[1126.29] ;W[ja]WL[889.189];B[ka]BL[1123.32];W[ia]WL[888.022];B[lr]BL[1110.85];W[kr]WL[884.171] ;B[io]BL[1107.26];W[ho]WL[881.493];B[gk]BL[1101.42];W[gj]WL[878.592];B[fm]BL[1097.32] ;W[em]WL[869.896];B[bj]BL[1091.05];W[bl]WL[866.912];B[ak]BL[1086.89];W[al]WL[866.052] ;B[mq]BL[1083.01];W[ls]WL[854.263];B[ms]BL[1077.89];W[ks]WL[853.116];B[nr]BL[1071.63] ;W[or]WL[851.46];B[oq]BL[1067.01];W[op]WL[849.219];B[os]BL[1064.46];W[pq]WL[847.345] ;B[pr]BL[1061.46];W[qr]WL[842.449];B[oq]BL[1056.11];W[qs]WL[841.086];B[or]BL[1053.4] ;W[ps]WL[839.187];B[mr]BL[1050.42];W[lp]WL[829.19];B[lo]BL[1046.99];W[ma]WL[790.418] ;B[la]BL[1040.35];W[aj]WL[774.915];B[ds]BL[1035.39];W[es]WL[772.519];B[er]BL[1032.16] ;W[eq]WL[762.597];B[fs]BL[1028.94];W[fr]WL[761.482];B[es]BL[1026.83];W[gs]WL[759.469] ;B[cs]BL[1023.42];W[gq]WL[758.385];B[bp]BL[1013.99];W[ap]WL[756.285];B[dn]BL[1006.76] ;W[cn]WL[746.73];B[dm]BL[1002.58];W[el]WL[744.535];B[ar]BL[998.454];W[br]WL[734.589] ;B[fn]BL[987.733];W[mk]WL[728.732];B[ln]BL[981.036];W[om]WL[720.005];B[jh]BL[971.066] ;W[ki]WL[718.342];B[ii]BL[968.136];W[ij]WL[716.167];B[ih]BL[965.725];W[hj]WL[713.444] ;B[ik]BL[962.879];W[hk]WL[711.693];B[hl]BL[958.66];W[jj]WL[705.98];B[ko]BL[956.402] ;W[kj]WL[695.785];B[ba]BL[947.387];W[ca]WL[692.153];B[eb]BL[935.755];W[fb]WL[687.098] ;B[ea]BL[927.065];W[db]WL[676.315];B[bd]BL[906.033];W[as]WL[630.296];B[bq]BL[899.9] ;W[ar]WL[628.617];B[bs]BL[894.994];W[ao]WL[627.527];B[ne]BL[884.204];W[nf]WL[623.646] ;B[]BL[867.721];W[]WL[623.645]TB[ab][sk][aa][kb][ac][bc][ad][id][jd][ae][be][de] [je][af][bf][cf][ag][bg][ah][ch][dh][ph][qi][rj][sj][qk][rk][il][kl][rl][sl][jm] [km][lm][mm][kn][lp][ns]TW[qp][fq][hq][qq][rq][sq][gr][sa][ir][jr][rr][sr][hs][is] [js][rs][ss][ea][hr][fa][ga][ha][na][oa][pa][qa][ra][eb][ob][pb][qb][rb][sb][pc] [qc][rc][sc][qd][rd][sd][lg][mg][ng][an][lh][mh][li][mi][mj][ek][am][bm][bn][po] [gp]) (;W[qk]LB[pk:a]C[B cannot cut at (a).])) (;B[pk]C[B needs to fix his shape.])) (;W[cc]C[Correct local shape is this attach. See continuation.];B[bc];W[dc])) (;W[lr]C[You can connect under.])) (;B[lp]LB[lr:a]C[Connect solid. Now W cannot connect under with (a).])) (;W[ho])) (;W[do]C[Local vital point for B's shape.]))
Re:
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 7:25 am
by glyps
EdLee wrote:The game was Ades, W, 11k, versus AKANE44111, B, 12k.
Your username here is glyps, which is neither. 11k and 12k are very close.
Were you Ades ?
yes, i changed my game id, sorry for not adding that info earlier thanks for the review btw, im very grateful
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 7:29 am
by EdLee
Hi glyps, Ades,
When you 'quote' a post, you don't need to include the entire SGF.
Again: think from the audience's (forum members' ) perspective.
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 7:30 am
by EdLee
Hi glyps, Ades,
You're welcome. You may want to use the Preview button to preview your post before you Submit -- take a look at your post, look at it from the audience's perspective. (Then you probably would not include the SGF. )
Re:
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 7:32 am
by glyps
EdLee wrote:Hi glyps, Ades,
When you 'quote' a post, you don't need to include the entire SGF.
Again: think from the audience's (forum members' ) perspective.
ah yea, that was my mistake, i'll remove it by now
Re: A Game Vs. 12k
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 7:37 am
by skydyr
Are you white or black in the game?
Re: A Game Vs. 12k
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 7:44 am
by glyps
skydyr wrote:Are you white or black in the game?
im white.. i already write it out there just now
"Ades/Me (W) vs (B)"
Re: A Game Vs. 12k
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 9:24 am
by oca
@edLee on move 19 : "Wrong shape. This allows W to connect under with (a). See var."
As this was not direcly obvious to see at my level (or at least for me ), I tryied to prove that for myself and came with the following sequence. Are they correct or am I missing something ?
$$W Wrong shape, so W can connect $$ | . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . | $$ | . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . | $$ | . . X , O . . O X X X 4 X . . O . . . | $$ | . . . O . . . . O O O X 3 O . . . . . | $$ | . . . . . . . . . . . 1 2 . . . . . . | $$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 . . . . . . | $$ ----------------------------------------
[go]$$W $$ | . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . | $$ | . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . | $$ | . . X , O . . O X X X X . . . O . . . | $$ | . . . O . . . . O O O X 3 O . . . . . | $$ | . . . . . . . . . . 6 1 2 . . . . . . | $$ | . . . . . . . . . . . 5 4 . . . . . . | $$ ----------------------------------------[/go]
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 10:06 am
by EdLee
Hi oca,
Your third variation is interesting. Did you consider if W resists with at (a) ? Locally, it does look terrible for W. But, globally, we need to look at the group. Can you find another move for ?
oca wrote:
$$W try 2 $$ | . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . | $$ | . . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . | $$ | . . X , O . . O X X B X . a . O . . . | $$ | . . . O . . . . O O O X 3 O 6 . . . . | $$ | . . . . . . . . . . 5 1 2 4 . . . . . | $$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . | $$ ----------------------------------------