Please, anyone can give me a review about this game? (12k)
Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 9:58 pm
by DiogoBarbosa
Hello, everybody!
Please, anyone can help-me with a review about this game? I'm black.
Thank you all a lot!!!!!
Nice weekends everybody.
Please, anyone can help-me with a review about this game? I'm black.
Thank you all a lot!!!!!
Nice weekends everybody.
(;FF[4]
GM[1]
DT[2015-04-24]
PC[OGS: http://online-go.com/game/1934719]
PB[DiogoBarbosa]
PW[thin123]
BR[13k]
WR[9k]
CP[online-go.com]
RE[W+52.5]
SZ[19]
KM[6.5]
RU[japanese]
;B[pd]
;W[dp]
;B[cd]
;W[qp]
;B[id]
;W[pf]
C[DiogoBarbosa: Hi, have a good game!
thin123: u2
]
;B[nd]
;W[pb]
;B[qd]
;W[oc]
;B[nc]
;W[od]
;B[oe]
;W[nb]
;B[pc]
;W[ob]
;B[mb]
;W[rc]
;B[pe]
;W[qc]
;B[qa]
;W[ra]
;B[rb]
;W[qb]
;B[sa]
;W[pa]
;B[rd]
;W[ra]
;B[qf]
;W[sb]
;B[pg]
;W[of]
;B[qj]
;W[ql]
;B[fq]
;W[fp]
;B[gp]
;W[fo]
;B[eq]
;W[go]
;B[hp]
;W[jq]
;B[cq]
;W[dq]
;B[dr]
;W[cp]
;B[bq]
;W[bp]
;B[ep]
;W[eo]
;B[do]
;W[dn]
;B[co]
;W[bo]
;B[en]
;W[cn]
;B[cj]
;W[hr]
;B[gr]
;W[ec]
;B[dc]
;W[ed]
;B[cg]
;W[ib]
;B[gc]
;W[gb]
;B[hc]
;W[hb]
;B[fc]
;W[fb]
;B[db]
;W[eb]
;B[hn]
;W[og]
;B[ph]
;W[kc]
;B[nf]
;W[ng]
;B[oq]
;W[mq]
;B[po]
;W[qo]
;B[pn]
;W[qn]
;B[pm]
;W[rk]
;B[rj]
;W[mc]
;B[ho]
;W[md]
;B[ne]
;W[mg]
;B[ig]
;W[ce]
;B[be]
;W[cf]
;B[bf]
;W[dg]
;B[ch]
;W[bk]
;B[df]
;W[de]
;B[dh]
;W[eg]
;B[eh]
;W[ef]
;B[fg]
;W[gm]
;B[gk]
;W[gi]
;B[gh]
;W[fi]
;B[fh]
;W[hi]
;B[ck]
;W[bl]
;B[kp]
;W[kq]
;B[lp]
;W[mp]
;B[mo]
;W[no]
;B[np]
;W[nn]
;B[lq]
;W[lr]
;B[kr]
;W[mr]
;B[jr]
;W[iq]
;B[ir]
;W[jo]
;B[jp]
;W[lo]
;B[ip]
;W[mn]
;B[ol]
;W[pp]
;B[qm]
;W[rm]
;B[ml]
;W[ok]
;B[nk]
;W[oj]
;B[jl]
;W[kl]
;B[km]
;W[lm]
;B[pk]
;W[pl]
;B[qk]
;W[rl]
;B[ni]
;W[om]
;B[oi]
;W[li]
;B[nl]
;W[mj]
;B[nj]
;W[ll]
;B[ko]
;W[kn]
;B[jn]
;W[jm]
;B[im]
;W[in]
;B[hm]
;W[il]
;B[jk]
;W[ik]
;B[ij]
;W[jj]
;B[kk]
;W[hj]
;B[ii]
;W[lk]
;B[kj]
;W[ji]
;B[ih]
;W[hk]
;B[ki]
;W[jh]
;B[kh]
;W[jg]
;B[jf]
;W[kg]
;B[lh]
;W[lg]
;B[mh]
;W[ke]
;B[el]
;W[fm]
;B[em]
;W[gl]
;B[ei]
;W[fk]
;B[ek]
;W[ah]
;B[bj]
;W[aj]
;B[ci]
;W[da]
;B[ca]
;W[ea]
;B[dd]
;W[cb]
;B[bb]
;W[ba]
;B[cc]
;W[ca]
;B[bc]
;W[br]
;B[cr]
;W[aq]
;B[bi]
;W[ai]
;B[ag]
;W[ge]
;B[cl]
;W[bm]
;B[fj]
;W[gj]
;B[ej]
;W[sj]
;B[si]
;W[sk]
;B[rh]
;W[sd]
;B[se]
;W[sc]
;B[re]
;W[ie]
;B[je]
;W[hd]
;B[if]
;W[he]
;B[jd]
;W[ic]
;B[fe]
;W[ff]
;B[hf]
;W[gf]
;B[hh]
;W[kf]
;B[kd]
;W[ld]
;B[me]
;W[le]
;B[lb]
;W[kb]
;B[gn]
;W[fn]
;B[fl]
;W[gk]
;B[op]
;W[pq]
;B[rn]
;W[ro]
;B[ls]
;W[ms]
;B[ks]
;W[lj]
;B[cm]
;W[dm]
;B[dl]
;W[ab]
;B[ac]
;W[aa]
;B[bh]
;W[ak]
;B[io]
;W[jn]
;B[nm]
;W[on]
;B[oh]
;W[lc]
;B[mf]
;W[jc]
;B[mi]
;W[gg]
;B[bs]
;W[ar]
;B[er]
;W[do]
;B[cs]
;W[oo]
;B[as]
;W[ap]
;B[]
;W[]
C[DiogoBarbosa: thank you
thin123: ty
]
)
GM[1]
DT[2015-04-24]
PC[OGS: http://online-go.com/game/1934719]
PB[DiogoBarbosa]
PW[thin123]
BR[13k]
WR[9k]
CP[online-go.com]
RE[W+52.5]
SZ[19]
KM[6.5]
RU[japanese]
;B[pd]
;W[dp]
;B[cd]
;W[qp]
;B[id]
;W[pf]
C[DiogoBarbosa: Hi, have a good game!
thin123: u2
]
;B[nd]
;W[pb]
;B[qd]
;W[oc]
;B[nc]
;W[od]
;B[oe]
;W[nb]
;B[pc]
;W[ob]
;B[mb]
;W[rc]
;B[pe]
;W[qc]
;B[qa]
;W[ra]
;B[rb]
;W[qb]
;B[sa]
;W[pa]
;B[rd]
;W[ra]
;B[qf]
;W[sb]
;B[pg]
;W[of]
;B[qj]
;W[ql]
;B[fq]
;W[fp]
;B[gp]
;W[fo]
;B[eq]
;W[go]
;B[hp]
;W[jq]
;B[cq]
;W[dq]
;B[dr]
;W[cp]
;B[bq]
;W[bp]
;B[ep]
;W[eo]
;B[do]
;W[dn]
;B[co]
;W[bo]
;B[en]
;W[cn]
;B[cj]
;W[hr]
;B[gr]
;W[ec]
;B[dc]
;W[ed]
;B[cg]
;W[ib]
;B[gc]
;W[gb]
;B[hc]
;W[hb]
;B[fc]
;W[fb]
;B[db]
;W[eb]
;B[hn]
;W[og]
;B[ph]
;W[kc]
;B[nf]
;W[ng]
;B[oq]
;W[mq]
;B[po]
;W[qo]
;B[pn]
;W[qn]
;B[pm]
;W[rk]
;B[rj]
;W[mc]
;B[ho]
;W[md]
;B[ne]
;W[mg]
;B[ig]
;W[ce]
;B[be]
;W[cf]
;B[bf]
;W[dg]
;B[ch]
;W[bk]
;B[df]
;W[de]
;B[dh]
;W[eg]
;B[eh]
;W[ef]
;B[fg]
;W[gm]
;B[gk]
;W[gi]
;B[gh]
;W[fi]
;B[fh]
;W[hi]
;B[ck]
;W[bl]
;B[kp]
;W[kq]
;B[lp]
;W[mp]
;B[mo]
;W[no]
;B[np]
;W[nn]
;B[lq]
;W[lr]
;B[kr]
;W[mr]
;B[jr]
;W[iq]
;B[ir]
;W[jo]
;B[jp]
;W[lo]
;B[ip]
;W[mn]
;B[ol]
;W[pp]
;B[qm]
;W[rm]
;B[ml]
;W[ok]
;B[nk]
;W[oj]
;B[jl]
;W[kl]
;B[km]
;W[lm]
;B[pk]
;W[pl]
;B[qk]
;W[rl]
;B[ni]
;W[om]
;B[oi]
;W[li]
;B[nl]
;W[mj]
;B[nj]
;W[ll]
;B[ko]
;W[kn]
;B[jn]
;W[jm]
;B[im]
;W[in]
;B[hm]
;W[il]
;B[jk]
;W[ik]
;B[ij]
;W[jj]
;B[kk]
;W[hj]
;B[ii]
;W[lk]
;B[kj]
;W[ji]
;B[ih]
;W[hk]
;B[ki]
;W[jh]
;B[kh]
;W[jg]
;B[jf]
;W[kg]
;B[lh]
;W[lg]
;B[mh]
;W[ke]
;B[el]
;W[fm]
;B[em]
;W[gl]
;B[ei]
;W[fk]
;B[ek]
;W[ah]
;B[bj]
;W[aj]
;B[ci]
;W[da]
;B[ca]
;W[ea]
;B[dd]
;W[cb]
;B[bb]
;W[ba]
;B[cc]
;W[ca]
;B[bc]
;W[br]
;B[cr]
;W[aq]
;B[bi]
;W[ai]
;B[ag]
;W[ge]
;B[cl]
;W[bm]
;B[fj]
;W[gj]
;B[ej]
;W[sj]
;B[si]
;W[sk]
;B[rh]
;W[sd]
;B[se]
;W[sc]
;B[re]
;W[ie]
;B[je]
;W[hd]
;B[if]
;W[he]
;B[jd]
;W[ic]
;B[fe]
;W[ff]
;B[hf]
;W[gf]
;B[hh]
;W[kf]
;B[kd]
;W[ld]
;B[me]
;W[le]
;B[lb]
;W[kb]
;B[gn]
;W[fn]
;B[fl]
;W[gk]
;B[op]
;W[pq]
;B[rn]
;W[ro]
;B[ls]
;W[ms]
;B[ks]
;W[lj]
;B[cm]
;W[dm]
;B[dl]
;W[ab]
;B[ac]
;W[aa]
;B[bh]
;W[ak]
;B[io]
;W[jn]
;B[nm]
;W[on]
;B[oh]
;W[lc]
;B[mf]
;W[jc]
;B[mi]
;W[gg]
;B[bs]
;W[ar]
;B[er]
;W[do]
;B[cs]
;W[oo]
;B[as]
;W[ap]
;B[]
;W[]
C[DiogoBarbosa: thank you
thin123: ty
]
)
No problem; this is a good move.
OK. W played strangely here. B has a few good options. 3-3 at R17 also possible.
Trying to be fancy; greedy. Just connect solidly -- the result is already very good for B,
Now you have 2 cuts. You did not read either of them.
Now you have 3 cuts.
This looks like a vital point, but does not actually work.
Did you have a plan when W runs (
) ? ( No. )
Push solidly at D3.
This cut makes no sense. You did not think about the ladder.
This makes no sense. You did not think about the ladder.
This cut makes no sense.
,
Terrible. Very bad shape for Black.