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Ades
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2015 6:19 am
by Ades
Recording Starts 12.06.15

RANK
12.06.15 -- 10k
14.06.15 -- 11k

GAME -- B vs W Result
12.06.15
jaylee (11k) vs Ades (10k) W+Res WIN
13.06.15
Ades (10k) vs Aurak (6k) H4 W+Res LOST
roget (12k) vs Ades (10k) H2 W+Res WIN
marakula (10k) vs Ades (10k) B+Res LOST
Ades (10k) vs xohoho456 (9k) W+23.5 LOST
axel7897 (11k) vs Ades (10k) B+8.5 LOST
14.06.15
Ades (11k) vs karshin (3k) H8 W+Res LOST
Ades (11k) vs Xanarz (10k) W+2.5 LOST
Ades (11k) vs Hallonen (10k) W+Res LOST

BOOK
Learn To Play Go Vol 4

TSUMEGO
>Cho Elementary Tsumego
12.06.15 -- Problem 38
Re: Ades
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2015 6:19 am
by Ades
-Reserved-
Re: Ades
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2015 6:20 am
by Ades
-Reserved-
Re: Ades
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2015 7:13 am
by Ades
12.06.15jaylee (11k) vs Ades (10k) W+Res

Thought
inaccurate counting prediction lead to "feeling enough" play
would surely lost without B's simple mistake
lost focus in the end game, nearly lost alot

Comment from others
EdLee 
Reference
Toothpaste
Small Gap
Elephant Eye
13.06.15Ades (10k) vs Aurak (6k) H4 W+Res
PLEASE DO NOT COMMENT ON THIS GAME 
Thought
-Fear
-Agitation
-Thoughtlessness
-Irritionality
-Anger
Roget (12k) vs Ades (10k) H2 W+Res
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2015 10:41 am
by EdLee
Hi Ades,

E4.

not good.

not good. Just connect directly.

this shape can be cut.

Terible. B must cut.

K4 extend. Basic shape.

Good. "Hane head of 2 stones".
Good shape for B; bad shape for W. Very big.

K5 extend or K6 jump-attach.

P9. (Optional: peep P7 first.)

Bad habit. You force B to make eyes and good shape.

wrong direction. B wants up, not down.

Ridiculous. Cut, only move.

Wrong shape: H15 and K15 -- vital points. See
elephant's eye .

bad. See
toothpaste .

If B extends at E10, see
toothpaste .

Your local shapes are completely wrong.
You can play like this if you have read out you can kill B.
Otherwise, you are just making terrible shapes for yourself.
See
toothpaste .
See
small gaps . (Example: W H15 )
Re:
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2015 3:45 pm
by Ades
Hi EdLee, im very grateful that you keep helping me

this shape can be cut.
is G3 better?

P9. (Optional: peep P7 first.)

Bad habit. You force B to make eyes and good shape.
would you mind to show me the right sequence/move here
i realize that was a mistake, but im bit confused about the link, it didn't tell me why it was a mistake moreover it tells me that the move can be good sometime
im sorry that i kept making you repeating to tell me about this
it seems like, i play ordinary move but suddenly that toothpaste come out from no where.
what can i do, or perhaps what i think i can do, is protecting bigger side since its impossible to protect both

Your local shapes are completely wrong.
You can play like this if you have read out you can kill B.
Otherwise, you are just making terrible shapes for yourself.
did you mean, kill B? especially around this move, did you mind to show me a favorable sequence for W?
ah! can i ask you one more thing? it is the right rank for me to study pro games?
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2015 4:57 pm
by EdLee
Ades wrote: 
this shape can be cut.
is G3 better?
What do you think ?
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2015 4:59 pm
by EdLee

P9. (Optional: peep P7 first.)
Instead of

in the game, B can jump directly out, for example, to P9.
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2015 5:03 pm
by EdLee

Bad habit. You force B to make eyes and good shape.
would you mind to show me the right sequence/move here
There are 2 separate issues here.
First is recognition that

just helps B make eyes and good shape.
The second is to find a better move -- this is a separate issue.
I'm not sure what is the best local move.
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2015 5:06 pm
by EdLee

Wrong shape: H15 and K15 -- vital points.
i realize that was a mistake,
Once again, there are 2 separate issues here:
- Recognition of the bad shapes.
- Finding a better move.
Your first job is recognition.
Finding a better move, or the "best" move, is an entirely different issue.
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2015 5:08 pm
by EdLee
Ades wrote:im sorry that i kept making you repeating to tell me about this
it seems like, i play ordinary move but suddenly that toothpaste come out from no where.
what can i do
No need to say sorry.
This is your current level.
You WILL continue to make these bad shapes for some time.
For how long, we don't know yet; that depends on you.

As long as you make these bad shapes, hopefully, some people will point them out to you in your reviews.
It means you still have mis-understanding about them.
Re:
Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2015 4:23 am
by Ades
EdLee wrote:What do you think ?
by my reading, it was pretty better.
EdLee wrote:No need to say sorry.
This is your current level.
You WILL continue to make these bad shapes for some time.
For how long, we don't know yet; that depends on you.

As long as you make these bad shapes, hopefully, some people will point them out to you in your reviews.
It means you still have mis-understanding about them.
i'll try to put more weight on lesson regarding shapes
but for now i'll try to improve just from games regarding to my disturbing college schedule

Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2015 4:51 am
by EdLee
Ades wrote:by my reading, it was pretty better.
Both G3 and H4 can be cut. How is it better ?
Re:
Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2015 5:19 am
by Ades
EdLee wrote:Both G3 and H4 can be cut. How is it better ?
based on my tryings
Re: Ades
Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2015 8:30 am
by Ades
13.06.15
marakula (10k) vs Ades (10k) B+Res
Ades (10k) vs xohoho456 (9k) W+23.5
axel7897 (11k) vs Ades (10k) B+8.5