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Review Request! :D
Posted: Fri May 18, 2018 2:18 pm
by Glummie
Hello, I'm white.
Won tho, but could use a review.
Re: Review Request! :D
Posted: Fri May 18, 2018 2:50 pm
by dfan
It looks to me mostly like you pushed around a player who was significantly weaker than you. I think you will learn more (and people will be more motivated to post comments) from closer fights.
Re: Review Request! :D
Posted: Fri May 18, 2018 5:55 pm
by Joaz Banbeck
17: You have a slight weakness. Your opponent peeped at it. So you get to fix your weakness without losing a move to do it. Fill at E3, and thank your opponent.
20: Be very thankful that he missed the oppportuity to kill your corner by playing E3 himself.
33: What is he threatening? To make a few points in gote?
You have more important things to do. Try O17 or O4 or J6 or C13.
35: Solid, but way too unenterprising, especially at this stage of the game. Try K5, and your net still works, and you are splitting his stones.
36: Ouch. You have played FIVE stones on the G and H files, for a net profit of about five points. That is horribly inefficient for this stage of the game. You should be making ten point moves.
37: Much better! ( O17 is probably bigger, C13 is probably more usefil for getting the corner, but still it is good to see you making big moves )
43: You must play E16 here. ( When you play E17, there is a trap: he plays B17, you must prevent the connection underneath, so you play B16, then he crosscuts with E16. Because of the position of C14, he wins the ensuing fight. Set up a board and play this one out. )
This is the second time that you were saved from getting slaughtered by playing a weak opponent.
61: The cap at G14 is probably better.
As dfan suggested, you should play stronger players. By playing someone this weak, you are reinforcing some bad habits.