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Review Request! :D

Posted: Wed May 23, 2018 9:45 am
by Glummie
I am white! won again tho vs crazystone 3kyu, but i need a review.


Re: Review Request! :D

Posted: Thu May 24, 2018 9:34 am
by Joaz Banbeck
8: Corners are more important than sides. Reinforce D3 first.

9: fortunately for you, he attaches on the wrong side.

17: C2 is huge.

20: C2 is still the vital point here. It is sente for you.

21: Fortunately for you, the bot still missed C2.

24: When the bot forces you to play C2, you win. :)

Gotta go...more later.
Between now and then, meditate on the primacy of corners.

Re: Review Request! :D

Posted: Thu May 24, 2018 11:45 am
by Glummie
Joaz Banbeck wrote:8: Corners are more important than sides. Reinforce D3 first.

9: fortunately for you, he attaches on the wrong side.

17: C2 is huge.

20: C2 is still the vital point here. It is sente for you.

21: Fortunately for you, the bot still missed C2.

24: When the bot forces you to play C2, you win. :)

Gotta go...more later.
Between now and then, meditate on the primacy of corners.
Roger that!

Re: Review Request! :D

Posted: Thu May 24, 2018 4:39 pm
by mitsun
:w62: is a joseki mistake. You have to capture and let B connect under.
:w66: is small and does not properly protect the G16 weakness (as B promptly demonstrated). In hindsight, defending at C14 was important.
:w80: should probably just be E13, giving B no further forcing moves. The following B pushes and hane were painful. The sequence through :w96: was a huge loss. B gained great center strength, while reducing your formerly impressive moyo to a badly over-concentrated territory.
:w108: was very nice. Good tenuki, dan level move.
:w126: should just be O18 to keep sente. The game sequence cost you nearly a full move.

Re: Review Request! :D

Posted: Thu May 24, 2018 9:18 pm
by Glummie
mitsun wrote::w62: is a joseki mistake. You have to capture and let B connect under.
:w66: is small and does not properly protect the G16 weakness (as B promptly demonstrated). In hindsight, defending at C14 was important.
:w80: should probably just be E13, giving B no further forcing moves. The following B pushes and hane were painful. The sequence through :w96: was a huge loss. B gained great center strength, while reducing your formerly impressive moyo to a badly over-concentrated territory.
:w108: was very nice. Good tenuki, dan level move.
:w126: should just be O18 to keep sente. The game sequence cost you nearly a full move.
Thank you!