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12k asking for a review!

Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2019 9:32 pm
by TofuPython
https://online-go.com/game/16039736
Here's a game I just finished playing! Do you guys think you could look it over for me? I played white. I think I played pretty solidly, but I tended to play slow moves. Move 38 in particular I think was a mistake. K3 seems to be a better move in that scenario. I was neglectful to my upper left group for too long, and probably deserved to have that die. Thanks in advance

Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2019 2:02 am
by EdLee
How to get the SGF here ?

Re: 12k asking for a review!

Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2019 2:24 am
by jlt
Here is the sgf:


Quick remarks:

:w14: is better at C5. If Black responds with D6, then :w16: at F4 or F3.

:w18: reinforces Black, and in addition, after :b21:, you are surrounded, which is bad. :w18: should be used to split Black into two groups, for instance with D6.

:w36: good! Black is surrounded and Black has to live in gote. (Edit: but there was a better move, see Bill Spight's comment below.)

:w58: maybe not urgent at this point, since you are almost alive. :w58: at P14 would give you more territory (expands your territory while reducing Black's).

Re: 12k asking for a review!

Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2019 3:35 am
by Bill Spight
Go to :w36: and :w38: for life and death comments. :)


Re: 12k asking for a review!

Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2019 5:59 am
by TofuPython
Thanks for your replies! Go is very hard :scratch:

Re: 12k asking for a review!

Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2019 10:30 am
by Knotwilg
Another one from me.

Lesson to learn from your game: if the enemy seems to play overly aggressively, then play where the enemy neglected to play.


Re: 12k asking for a review!

Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2019 5:29 pm
by WindCaliber
Just one quick comment.
:black:117 is a big mistake, and you didn't have to connect. Instead, White could have cut on the second line for a large reduction. Black can't cut at S14, because after White captures, Black descends, and White fills in, White has 3 liberties vs. Black's 2 liberties.

Click Here To Show Diagram Code
[go]$$B :w6: fills in and B's 2 stones are dead.
$$ -----------------
$$ . . . . . . . . . |
$$ . . . . . . . . 4 |
$$ . . X . . . . 2 X |
$$ . . . . . X X X O |
$$ . . . . . . 1 O O |
$$ X . . . X . O 3 5 |
$$ X . . . . X O . . |[/go]