fwiffo review
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 7:14 pm
by serapis
As promised, fwiffo, here is your godiscussion's game.
Edit: I should note that i reviewed this game before i took a look at the komi so I had assumed it was an even game.
Edit: I should note that i reviewed this game before i took a look at the komi so I had assumed it was an even game.
(;GM[1]AP[StoneBase:SGFParser.3.0.1]SZ[19]GN[Malkovich #17]GC[Thank you, topazg!]CA[UTF-8]HA[0]KM[-35.00]PB[fwiffo]BR[4k]PW[topazg]WR[1d]RE[B+16.00]DT[2010-03-30,31,04-01,02,03,04,05,06,07,08,09,10,11,12,13,14]PC[godiscussions.com]
;B[pd];W[dd];B[qp];W[op]
(;B[pn];W[qq];B[rq];W[pq]
(;B[ro];W[kq];B[cf];W[fc];B[dp];W[ck];B[ci];W[cn]
(;B[cp]
(;W[ce];B[dm]C[This seems like an overplay.]
(;W[dn];B[bl];W[cm]
(;B[cl]C[I think this cut might be ill advised. ];W[dl];B[dk];W[em];B[bk];W[fq];B[eq];W[fp];B[no];W[mp];B[pi];W[fr];B[bo];W[nc]LB[pc:A][pf:B]MA[pi]C[I would prefer A or B as a response here given the marked stones position.]
(;B[lc]C[Pincer here says you're not sure where your territory is coming from. ]
(;W[pf];B[nd];W[md];B[mc];W[qc]
(;B[pc];W[qd];B[ne];W[ln];B[qe];W[re];B[qf];W[rf];B[qg]
(;W[ic];B[mm]
(;W[mi];B[ki]C[Good reply. White has become greedy and given you a chance.];W[kh];B[jh];W[pj];B[oi];W[qj];B[rg];W[pb];B[ob];W[qb];B[nk];W[lm];B[ml];W[kg];B[li];W[jg];B[in];W[il];B[jl]
(;W[jk];B[kl];W[im];B[kn];W[jn];B[mo];W[jo];B[km];W[lp];B[mg]
(;W[nb]
(;B[oc];W[oa];B[mb];W[na];B[ma];W[pa];B[le];W[pe];B[od];W[kd];B[ld];W[df];B[cg];W[ek];B[ee];W[ef];B[je];W[ie]
(;B[jd];W[id];B[eh];W[cs];B[bs];W[cr];B[br];W[bq];B[bp];W[cq];B[bm];W[bn];B[an];W[am];B[al];W[dj];B[cj];W[ij]
(;B[lo];W[pp];B[po];W[ji];B[np];W[nq];B[kk];W[lf];B[mf];W[ke];B[kc];W[kf];B[jc];W[oo];B[on];W[fh]
(;B[ih];W[ig];B[eg];W[fg];B[ei];W[be];B[bf];W[af];B[ag];W[ae];B[dg];W[fi];B[rr];W[er];B[pr];W[or];B[qr];W[oq];B[os];W[nr];B[ns];W[ms];B[ps];W[mr];B[jb];W[ib];B[ia];W[ha];B[ja];W[hb];B[ej];W[fj];B[di];W[eo];B[ko];W[kp];B[dr];W[ds];B[dq];W[aq];B[dk];W[lh];B[mh];W[jf];B[kj];W[jj];B[sf];W[sd];B[sg];W[sb];B[se];W[rd];B[am];W[ap];B[ao];W[ep];B[lg];W[do];B[jm];W[co];B[tt];W[tt])
(;B[be]C[i think this is your only hope to break in.];W[bd];B[de];W[cd];B[fg];W[ff];B[fi];W[gh];B[di];W[gi];B[fj];W[gk];B[gj];W[hj];B[eg];W[fk];B[ei];W[gg];B[af]C[A few points anyway.]))))
(;B[df]))
(;W[df]C[White passes opportunity to expand.])))
(;W[lm]C[White isn't counting. He doesn't need an invasion.];B[ml];W[ll];B[lk];W[kk];B[lj];W[rg];B[rh];W[kj];B[li];W[ek]))
(;W[nm]C[White gives you a chance by omiting this point. ];B[pl];W[ek]C[No chance to expand on top and its small in any case.]))
(;B[ne];W[qd];B[oc];W[qg];B[ri]C[Expected. Though now i worry about black's territory.]))
(;W[qc];B[qd];W[pc];B[od];W[nb];B[me];W[rd];B[re];W[rc];B[qf]MA[pi]C[I do not like the relationship of blacks stones here very much. The marked stone made the top overconcentrated while leaving a bit of a gap for black on the right.
If black is lucky, all that effort will go into keeping the 4th line. ];W[ok]C[Possible? Small knights on the bottom are probably too weak to stand up to a counter attack.]))
(;B[pc]
(;W[ne];B[md];W[nd];B[pg]C[White will have aji in this variation however he tries to settle on the top, where black is picking up some points.])
(;W[qf]
(;B[nd]C[Here, white tries to make a living group on the bottom while giving up the top.])
(;B[qh]
(;W[oe];B[pe];W[pf];B[of]C[Not playable for white])
(;W[of];B[nd]C[Long running group for white.])
(;W[ne];B[md];W[nd];B[pf])))))
(;B[bk];W[cl];B[cj];W[fq];B[fp];W[gp];B[fo]C[Here, because white was not given any shape, he's in trouble.]))
(;W[ek]
(;B[cm];W[ei]C[All white needs to do here is counter attack black's stones which have, at the moment, been abandoned.];B[ef];W[gf])
(;B[df]C[Seems like only move.])))
(;W[en];B[fq];W[ce];B[df];W[dh];B[ch]
(;W[ej]C[White can grab fine shape and assault black's position without worry.])
(;W[ff]C[Also possible depending on where white wants to build.];B[ej]C[Not severe against white has he's already out on the left.];W[kc])))
(;B[co];W[dn];B[fq]C[Preference. corner defense by itself seems a bit soft.];W[ce];B[df]
(;W[ej])
(;W[ff];B[ej]C[White has to be a little more cautious with this group.];W[el])))
(;B[lp]C[Although the corner is open in the bottom left, the pincer here could still be nice for black in terms of quick development. It should be noted that it's difficult to predict whites next moves exactly.];W[rr];B[no];W[dp];B[fq];W[cn];B[pi]))
(;B[oq]LB[pn:A]C[My personal preference is to attach rather than to back off. A has always felt a little bit slow to me.]))
;B[pd];W[dd];B[qp];W[op]
(;B[pn];W[qq];B[rq];W[pq]
(;B[ro];W[kq];B[cf];W[fc];B[dp];W[ck];B[ci];W[cn]
(;B[cp]
(;W[ce];B[dm]C[This seems like an overplay.]
(;W[dn];B[bl];W[cm]
(;B[cl]C[I think this cut might be ill advised. ];W[dl];B[dk];W[em];B[bk];W[fq];B[eq];W[fp];B[no];W[mp];B[pi];W[fr];B[bo];W[nc]LB[pc:A][pf:B]MA[pi]C[I would prefer A or B as a response here given the marked stones position.]
(;B[lc]C[Pincer here says you're not sure where your territory is coming from. ]
(;W[pf];B[nd];W[md];B[mc];W[qc]
(;B[pc];W[qd];B[ne];W[ln];B[qe];W[re];B[qf];W[rf];B[qg]
(;W[ic];B[mm]
(;W[mi];B[ki]C[Good reply. White has become greedy and given you a chance.];W[kh];B[jh];W[pj];B[oi];W[qj];B[rg];W[pb];B[ob];W[qb];B[nk];W[lm];B[ml];W[kg];B[li];W[jg];B[in];W[il];B[jl]
(;W[jk];B[kl];W[im];B[kn];W[jn];B[mo];W[jo];B[km];W[lp];B[mg]
(;W[nb]
(;B[oc];W[oa];B[mb];W[na];B[ma];W[pa];B[le];W[pe];B[od];W[kd];B[ld];W[df];B[cg];W[ek];B[ee];W[ef];B[je];W[ie]
(;B[jd];W[id];B[eh];W[cs];B[bs];W[cr];B[br];W[bq];B[bp];W[cq];B[bm];W[bn];B[an];W[am];B[al];W[dj];B[cj];W[ij]
(;B[lo];W[pp];B[po];W[ji];B[np];W[nq];B[kk];W[lf];B[mf];W[ke];B[kc];W[kf];B[jc];W[oo];B[on];W[fh]
(;B[ih];W[ig];B[eg];W[fg];B[ei];W[be];B[bf];W[af];B[ag];W[ae];B[dg];W[fi];B[rr];W[er];B[pr];W[or];B[qr];W[oq];B[os];W[nr];B[ns];W[ms];B[ps];W[mr];B[jb];W[ib];B[ia];W[ha];B[ja];W[hb];B[ej];W[fj];B[di];W[eo];B[ko];W[kp];B[dr];W[ds];B[dq];W[aq];B[dk];W[lh];B[mh];W[jf];B[kj];W[jj];B[sf];W[sd];B[sg];W[sb];B[se];W[rd];B[am];W[ap];B[ao];W[ep];B[lg];W[do];B[jm];W[co];B[tt];W[tt])
(;B[be]C[i think this is your only hope to break in.];W[bd];B[de];W[cd];B[fg];W[ff];B[fi];W[gh];B[di];W[gi];B[fj];W[gk];B[gj];W[hj];B[eg];W[fk];B[ei];W[gg];B[af]C[A few points anyway.]))))
(;B[df]))
(;W[df]C[White passes opportunity to expand.])))
(;W[lm]C[White isn't counting. He doesn't need an invasion.];B[ml];W[ll];B[lk];W[kk];B[lj];W[rg];B[rh];W[kj];B[li];W[ek]))
(;W[nm]C[White gives you a chance by omiting this point. ];B[pl];W[ek]C[No chance to expand on top and its small in any case.]))
(;B[ne];W[qd];B[oc];W[qg];B[ri]C[Expected. Though now i worry about black's territory.]))
(;W[qc];B[qd];W[pc];B[od];W[nb];B[me];W[rd];B[re];W[rc];B[qf]MA[pi]C[I do not like the relationship of blacks stones here very much. The marked stone made the top overconcentrated while leaving a bit of a gap for black on the right.
If black is lucky, all that effort will go into keeping the 4th line. ];W[ok]C[Possible? Small knights on the bottom are probably too weak to stand up to a counter attack.]))
(;B[pc]
(;W[ne];B[md];W[nd];B[pg]C[White will have aji in this variation however he tries to settle on the top, where black is picking up some points.])
(;W[qf]
(;B[nd]C[Here, white tries to make a living group on the bottom while giving up the top.])
(;B[qh]
(;W[oe];B[pe];W[pf];B[of]C[Not playable for white])
(;W[of];B[nd]C[Long running group for white.])
(;W[ne];B[md];W[nd];B[pf])))))
(;B[bk];W[cl];B[cj];W[fq];B[fp];W[gp];B[fo]C[Here, because white was not given any shape, he's in trouble.]))
(;W[ek]
(;B[cm];W[ei]C[All white needs to do here is counter attack black's stones which have, at the moment, been abandoned.];B[ef];W[gf])
(;B[df]C[Seems like only move.])))
(;W[en];B[fq];W[ce];B[df];W[dh];B[ch]
(;W[ej]C[White can grab fine shape and assault black's position without worry.])
(;W[ff]C[Also possible depending on where white wants to build.];B[ej]C[Not severe against white has he's already out on the left.];W[kc])))
(;B[co];W[dn];B[fq]C[Preference. corner defense by itself seems a bit soft.];W[ce];B[df]
(;W[ej])
(;W[ff];B[ej]C[White has to be a little more cautious with this group.];W[el])))
(;B[lp]C[Although the corner is open in the bottom left, the pincer here could still be nice for black in terms of quick development. It should be noted that it's difficult to predict whites next moves exactly.];W[rr];B[no];W[dp];B[fq];W[cn];B[pi]))
(;B[oq]LB[pn:A]C[My personal preference is to attach rather than to back off. A has always felt a little bit slow to me.]))