I would like to do something on the top left corner to reduce white, but I do not know where to play. I thought about playing at a or b, but I was worried about "kick and pincer" by white. So I ended up playing in c, which ended up badly -- it became a large group without eyes and was ultimately killed.
I have also attached the SGF file of this game in this post. I've found the game quite interesting, because one of my large group was killed, but I also managed to kill my opponent large group, ending up in a win for me.
I have added some of my thoughts in the SGF file, and if anyone could review that, it will be highly appreciated. Thanks!
My first reaction is tengen. It kind of invites an approach in the lower right. You could hope to give up a small group there and secure some territory in sente and then approach the upper left yourself.
But all the is gut feeling and has no analysis behind it.
Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 6:46 pm
by EdLee
Hi gostudent, at these levels you can play many OK opening moves -- if you play a bad move, and as a result die a horrible death, great! Then get your game reviewed here (or KGS, etc.) ! Then people will point out what really went wrong.
Your few candidate opening moves in your diagram -- (a), (b), and (c) -- are all OK at these levels. No problem at all. So if you get a bad result, it is NOT because of your choice of (a), (b), or (c). Rather, the mistake(s) will be in your follow-ups.
It's all in your basics.
Re: Where to play in this opening position?
Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 8:51 pm
by hyperpape
I would put more blame on the following moves. In particular, 17 is bad: you give up most the remaining aji in the corner in exchange for next to nothing. 19 also accomplishes very little--it strengthens your group a tiny bit, but it would be better to move out or to pincer white's stone at the top.
Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 9:54 pm
by EdLee
Main lesson: many people at these levels like to focus on the opening moves. Of course, the opening is interesting and it's good to study. But what they fail to understand is their biggest mistakes are not in the opening moves. Rather, it is in their follow-ups.
(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2] RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[-5.50]TM[60] PW[kuma1409]PB[golearner9]WR[12k]BR[13k]DT[2014-03-03]PC[IGS:]C[ ]RE[B+29.50]LT[]NB[16]NW[17]RR[Normal] ;B[pd]BL[47] ;W[dc]WL[60] ;B[pq]BL[43] ;W[cp]WL[54] ;B[qk]BL[15] ;W[dj]WL[51] ;B[fp]BL[597] ;W[cm]WL[46] ;B[jq]BL[561] ;W[jd]WL[43] ;B[cf]BL[528]C[gs. This is probably a bad move.
e. No problem at these levels -- all your big mistakes come later, in the follow-ups.] (;W[ch]WL[37]C[See var.] (;B[gd]BL[499]C[gs. another bad move i guessed.
See var.] ;W[de]WL[34] ;B[ff]BL[470] ;W[df]WL[31] ;B[ed]BL[464]C[Bad exchange -- good for W, bad for B.] ;W[dd]WL[29] ;B[gf]BL[444]LB[ed:3][gd:1][cf:a][ff:2][gf:4]C[Very, very slow.
Locally, we see a common problem, misunderstanding, at these levels. Many people at these levels like to focus on opening moves, such as where to play (a). However, that is not the biggest problem. The biggest mistakes are in the Follow-ups.
Here, after (a), out of the four follow-ups, at least two are iffy. THAT is the main problem -- mistakes in the follow-ups.] ;W[mc]WL[27] (;B[nc]BL[438]C[gs. i want to make it over concentrated. is this okay ?
e. Not OK. Bad move. Basics mistake. See var.] ;W[md]WL[26]LB[nc:a][nd:b]C[Notice you forced W to be stronger -- W has now gained 1 liberty, from 4 to 5, than before this contact move. Your (a) stone, on the other hand, has lost 1 liberty on contact, from 4 to 3.
Your force W to become stronger, and your (a) weaker, at this moment.
Now you have to continue to push at (b) to continue this contact fight...] (;B[pf]BL[432]LB[nb:c][mc:b][nc:a][nd:d]C[...which you failed to do.
Notice after your bad (a)-(b) exchange, which made W stronger and your (a) weaker, locally W has sente moves, such as (c), (d), etc.
See var.] (;W[ph]WL[23]C[See var.] ;B[ok]BL[403] ;W[nh]WL[20] ;B[nf]BL[393] ;W[lh]WL[16] ;B[lf]BL[386] ;W[ne]WL[13] ;B[oe]BL[376] ;W[nd]WL[12] ;B[oc]BL[358] ;W[jf]WL[10] ;B[mg]BL[317] ;W[mh]WL[6] ;B[kg]BL[313] ;W[ec]WL[2] (;B[fc]BL[295] ;W[ee]WL[600] (;B[fd]BL[289]C[Again, too slow, too small. See vars.] ;W[hc]WL[599]LB[ic:c][fd:b][cf:a]TR[hb]C[gs. would triangle be better? i want to settle this group but i failed completely.
e. You are one step behind W, because of your slow move (b). You wanted B (c) for yourself, to try to make a base. Now W gets this huge shared point first. It is now too late for you to settle here.
Another local tally -- after your opening move (a), out of your 6 local follow-ups, 3 of them are iffy.
The biggest problem is not in your opening moves. It is in your follow-ups.] ;B[gb]BL[252] ;W[hb]WL[595] ;B[ie]BL[214] ;W[je]WL[593] ;B[id]BL[209] ;W[ic]WL[592] ;B[jc]BL[192] ;W[kc]WL[590] ;B[jb]BL[188] ;W[kb]WL[589] ;B[jg]BL[114] ;W[if]WL[576] ;B[hh]BL[89] ;W[ig]WL[506] ;B[ih]BL[594] ;W[hg]WL[501] ;B[eg]BL[487]TR[gg][fh]C[this looks weird but i was trying to avoid toothpaste since i cannot stop white from pushing through if i played at either triangle point.] ;W[gg]WL[491] ;B[dg]BL[480] ;W[cg]WL[489] ;B[ei]BL[433] ;W[gh]WL[403] ;B[di]BL[413] ;W[ci]WL[325] ;B[cj]BL[398] ;W[dk]WL[320] ;B[bj]BL[376] ;W[bf]WL[316] ;B[fj]BL[366] ;W[gi]WL[314] ;B[gj]BL[352] ;W[hi]WL[312] ;B[hj]BL[333] ;W[ii]WL[309] ;B[ji]BL[324] ;W[ij]WL[307] ;B[jj]BL[318] ;W[ik]WL[305]TR[fj][gj][hj]C[at this point i thought the three triangle stones are enough for my escape but i was wrong. ] ;B[jk]BL[308] ;W[mk]WL[301]TR[gm]C[maybe playing at triangle point is better?] ;B[jm]BL[263] ;W[il]WL[299] ;B[jl]BL[260] ;W[mm]WL[296] ;B[pn]BL[249] ;W[fl]WL[294] ;B[gl]BL[244] ;W[gm]WL[597] ;B[hl]BL[235] ;W[hk]WL[596] ;B[gk]BL[232] ;W[hm]WL[595] ;B[im]BL[115] ;W[fm]WL[576] ;B[hd]BL[110] ;W[fe]WL[572] ;B[ha]BL[100] ;W[ja]WL[570] ;B[gc]BL[69] ;W[ib]WL[479] ;B[mp]BL[15] ;W[oj]WL[477] ;B[pj]BL[12] ;W[oi]WL[474] ;B[qh]BL[581] ;W[qg]WL[472] ;B[pg]BL[564] ;W[qi]WL[467] ;B[rh]BL[562] ;W[ri]WL[459] ;B[pi]BL[556] ;W[oh]WL[457] ;B[rg]BL[551] ;W[nk]WL[455] ;B[ol]BL[540] ;W[nl]WL[453] ;B[om]BL[501] ;W[ll]WL[430] ;B[lj]BL[453] ;W[mj]WL[426] ;B[lk]BL[444] ;W[li]WL[424] ;B[ni]BL[438] ;W[ln]WL[419] ;B[km]BL[410] ;W[nn]WL[415] ;B[mo]BL[395] ;W[mn]WL[413]TR[kp]C[maybe triangle point better ?] ;B[jo]BL[367] ;W[lp]WL[409] ;B[lq]BL[363] ;W[np]WL[407] ;B[nq]BL[352] ;W[no]WL[405] ;B[op]BL[341] ;W[lo]WL[396] ;B[mq]BL[338] ;W[po]WL[598] ;B[oo]BL[308] ;W[on]WL[594] ;B[qo]BL[287] ;W[pm]WL[592] ;B[qn]BL[257] ;W[ql]WL[588] ;B[qm]BL[248] ;W[nm]WL[583] ;B[lm]BL[239] ;W[pl]WL[580] ;B[pk]BL[236] ;W[rl]WL[579] ;B[rk]BL[230] ;W[rj]WL[578] ;B[sl]BL[223] ;W[rm]WL[570] ;B[rn]BL[597] ;W[jp]WL[564] ;B[ip]BL[568] ;W[kq]WL[558] ;B[kp]BL[564] ;W[lg]WL[551] ;B[kf]BL[541] ;W[kj]WL[549] ;B[kk]BL[538] ;W[jh]WL[548] ;B[kh]BL[531] ;W[ng]WL[546] ;B[mf]BL[524] ;W[eq]WL[539] ;B[fq]BL[519] ;W[ep]WL[537] ;B[fo]BL[508] ;W[eo]WL[535] ;B[fn]BL[496] ;W[en]WL[533] ;B[mb]BL[433] ;W[lb]WL[530] ;B[na]BL[411] ;W[la]WL[528] ;B[er]BL[383] ;W[dr]WL[525] ;B[fr]BL[380] ;W[ho]WL[522] ;B[hp]BL[376] ;W[go]WL[521] ;B[ds]BL[338] ;W[cs]WL[516] ;B[cr]BL[300] ;W[es]WL[598] ;B[fs]BL[297] ;W[gp]WL[597] ;B[gq]BL[287] ;W[br]WL[593] ;B[ds]BL[274] ;W[cq]WL[592] ;B[ih]BL[238] ;W[in]WL[587] ;B[jn]BL[231] ;W[gn]WL[585] ;B[io]BL[226] ;W[ma]WL[581] ;B[nb]BL[222] ;W[od]WL[581] ;B[pc]BL[218] ;W[ke]WL[580] ;B[le]BL[594] ;W[ld]WL[579] ;B[og]BL[523]C[not sure what i was thinking . hmm] ;W[qe]WL[568] ;B[pe]BL[519] ;W[rc]WL[566] ;B[qf]BL[513] ;W[qb]WL[564] ;B[ra]BL[510] ;W[pb]WL[562] ;B[sb]BL[492] ;W[rd]WL[561] ;B[re]BL[485] ;W[se]WL[560] ;B[rf]BL[471] ;W[ob]WL[558] ;B[rb]BL[439] ;W[qa]WL[555] ;B[oa]BL[395] ;W[qc]WL[551] ;B[qd]BL[385] ;W[sd]WL[549] ;B[hn]BL[366] ;W[sc]WL[540] ;B[in]BL[353] ;W[hh]WL[536] ;B[jh]BL[348] ;W[me]WL[532] ;B[es]BL[334] ;W[ki]WL[507] ;B[kr]BL[292] ;W[hr]WL[501] ;B[hq]BL[288] ;W[sa]WL[587] ;B[rb]BL[284] ;W[]WL[587] ;B[]BL[279] ;W[]WL[587]C[] ;TW[aa][ba][ca][da][ea][fa][ga][ha][ia][ka][ab][bb][cb][db][eb][fb][gb][jb][ac][bc][cc][fc][gc][jc][lc][ad][bd][cd][ed][fd][gd][hd][id][kd][ae][be][ce][ge][he][ie][af][cf][ef][ff][gf][hf][ag][bg][dg][eg][fg][ah][bh][dh][eh][fh][ai][bi][di][ei][fi][aj][bj][cj][ej][fj][gj][hj][ak][bk][ck][ek][fk][gk][al][bl][cl][dl][el][gl][hl][am][bm][dm][em][an][bn][cn][dn][ao][bo][co][do][ap][bp][dp][aq][bq][dq][ar][cr][as][bs]TB[pa][qa][ra][sa][ob][pb][qb][sb][qc][rc][sc][rd][sd][qe][se][of][sf][lg][ng][qg][sg][lh][mh][nh][oh][ph][sh][ki][li][mi][oi][qi][ri][si][kj][mj][nj][oj][qj][rj][sj][mk][nk][sk][kl][ll][ml][nl][pl][ql][rl][mm][nm][pm][rm][sm][kn][ln][mn][nn][on][sn][ko][lo][no][po][ro][so][jp][lp][np][pp][qp][rp][sp][iq][kq][oq][qq][rq][sq][gr][hr][ir][jr][lr][mr][nr][or][pr][qr][rr][sr][gs][hs][is][js][ks][ls][ms][ns][os][ps][qs][rs][ss]OS[kwmttskz]) (;B[ic]C[Try to make a base. See also 3rd var.]) (;B[fi]C[Run !])) (;B[ee]C[would the alternative be a better move ?])) (;W[nb]LB[mc:b][nc:a][pf:c]C[Thanks to your bad (a)-(b) exchange, plus the (c) tenuki, now W can take away your cash, in sente. See continuation.] ;B[oc] ;W[ob]LB[nc:1][pd:a][pf:2]C[W continues to take away your cash, in sente.
A similar pattern emerges in this corner -- after your opening move (a), both your local follow-ups, (1) and (2), are iffy.
Once again, the biggest problem is not in your opening moves. It is in your follow-ups.] ;B[pb] ;W[qc] ;B[pc])) (;B[nd]LB[mc:b][nc:a]C[Once you start the contact fight (a)-(b), you have to continue with the fight.])) (;B[oc]LB[kc:a]C[In this case, don't make contact with W to make W stronger.
For example, if you don't make W stronger, then W still has weaknesses such as (a). Your contact exchange in the game forced W to fix his weakness !])) (;B[cc]C[Interesting to look up this joseki.] ;W[cd] ;B[dd] ;W[bc] ;B[cb] ;W[de] ;B[ed] ;W[ce] ;B[bb] ;W[fe] ;B[ee] ;W[ef] ;B[ec] ;W[df]C[Look up and study this joseki.])) (;W[cd]))
Re: Where to play in this opening position?
Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 10:43 pm
by gostudent
Thank you EdLee for your review! Your comments are appreciated. Indeed the follow-up is more important than the opening moves, and I'll pay attention to that.
With respect to the kick at the top right corner in move 21. I've now realized that, in the game, I have failed to notice the difference between this joseki with the actual game sequence:
The fact that B5 is a diagonal move here, instead of a knight move in the game, it makes a big difference. Am I right?
Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 10:48 pm
by EdLee
Hi gostudent, you're very welcome.
gostudent wrote:The fact that is a diagonal move here, instead of a knight move in the game, it makes a big difference. Am I right?
Yes. Huge difference. Completely different shapes. Almost zero connection between the two.
Another big lesson here: Go is super super specific. Even one stone, one liberty, one point, one eye, one move too soon or too late, one line off, or one ko threat can sometimes mean life versus death or game over.
Many times over in your Go career you'll learn to appreciate this, both with great joy and tremendous pain.
Re: Where to play in this opening position?
Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2014 12:35 am
by Joaz Banbeck
Your two space low approach might not be too bad if you follow it up like this:
Joaz Banbeck wrote:Your two space low approach might not be too bad if you follow it up like this:
I'd actually go further and say that should give black a good result as white's pincer at c12 was from the wrong direction (inefficient with d10 already there) as he should have played from the corner with c16 as black can't then make a good extension with d10 in the way already (don't pincer when you already have a pincer in place).
Re: Where to play in this opening position?
Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2014 3:37 am
by LuckyJim
Uberdude wrote:
Joaz Banbeck wrote: (don't pincer when you already have a pincer in place).
What do you generally do with a pincer already in place? And if it is 3 spaces away like in the example, what would be a good move for white?
Re: Where to play in this opening position?
Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2014 4:13 am
by Uberdude
LuckyJim wrote:
Uberdude wrote:(don't pincer when you already have a pincer in place).
What do you generally do with a pincer already in place? And if it is 3 spaces away like in the example, what would be a good move for white?
In general if your opponent approaches a corner and you already have a pincer in place then play from the direction of the corner to stop the approach stone making eyes in that direction. For a 4-4 stone kick and one point jump after opponent extends would be normal, for low approach to 3-4 kick and knights's move or kosumi is the same idea; in this example of a distant approach to 3-4 then c16 is a simple and good move to make corner territory and stop black making eyes in the corner.
Re: Where to play in this opening position?
Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2014 6:56 am
by HermanHiddema
Uberdude wrote:In general if your opponent approaches a corner and you already have a pincer in place then play from the direction of the corner to stop the approach stone making eyes in that direction. For a 4-4 stone kick and one point jump after opponent extends would be normal, for low approach to 3-4 kick and knights's move or kosumi is the same idea; in this example of a distant approach to 3-4 then c16 is a simple and good move to make corner territory and stop black making eyes in the corner.
Some diagrams to illustrate the point Uberdude makes: