I'm not sure my exact rank, I'm kind of re-climbing the ladder in IGS. I'm white in this game.
Just from quickly looking over this game myself, I see that I have a tendency to follow my opponent around instead of ignoring him. This game also features some beautiful attack-blindness by myself, which fortunately didn't ruin me. I only really won because my opponent didn't pick up on weakness I left behind when following him.
Obviously, being a DDK, I have a lot more bad habits to work on. This is a pretty typical game for me; can anyone else spot any areas I should prioritize for improvement?
My comments go through move 36 - I didn't have time to look at more.
(;GM[1]EV[Internet Go Server game: akashe vs manabufarm]US[Brought to you by IGS PANDANET]CoPyright[ Copyright (c) PANDANET Inc. 2014 Permission to reproduce this game is given, provided proper credit is given. No warrantee, implied or explicit, is understood. Use of this game is an understanding and agreement of this notice. ]GN[akashe-manabufarm(B) IGS]RE[W+22.5]PW[akashe]WR[17k?]NW[12]PB[manabufarm]BR[15k?]NB[14]PC[IGS: igs.joyjoy.net 6969]DT[2014-02-17]SZ[19]TM[600]KM[6.500000]LT[]RR[Normal];B[pp]BL[597]C[ manabufarm 15k?: 322 hi akashe 17k?: Hi! ];W[dp]WL[594];B[pc]BL[592];W[dd]WL[585];B[oj]BL[586];W[pe]WL[576];B[oe]BL[577];W[pd]WL[552]C[JB: As a general rule, it is not good to walk into the hane at the head of two stones. But some pros have been known to play this, apparently considering the corner to be worth it.];B[od]BL[570](;W[pf]WL[547]C[JB: Ignoring the corner could be costly. See variation.](;B[ph]BL[565]C[JB: He plays an inferior move. See variation.];W[og]WL[536];B[mg]BL[555];W[qc]WL[528]C[JB: GOOD! You get the big move.];B[nc]BL[534](;W[nq]WL[519]C[JB: Not bad, but you have unfinished business elsewhere. See variation.];B[cc]BL[522](;W[dc]WL[497]C[JB: Probably the wrong direction. You end up with a wall facing his wall. There are not great prospects for you there. See variation through to its end. ];B[cd]BL[511];W[ce]WL[495];B[be]BL[505];W[cf]WL[489];B[bf]BL[499](;W[bg]WL[486]C[JBN: Creates unnecessary weakness for you. See variation.];B[ag]BL[468];W[ah]WL[443];B[bd]BL[459](;W[bh]WL[436]C[JB: Still leaving the cutting point at D15. See variation.];B[af]BL[443](;W[cb]WL[434]C[JB: This is gote. See variation.];B[bb]BL[438]C[ akashe 17k?: misclick sorry ];W[ca]WL[430]C[ akashe 17k?: thanks manabufarm 15k?: 322 it hapens ];B[ba]BL[424];W[db]WL[425];B[np]BL[380]TR[pq](;W[pq]WL[404]C[JB: Not too good, for he gets to push through. See variation]TR[qq](;B[qq]BL[356];W[op]WL[395];B[pr]BL[352];W[oq]WL[390];B[po]BL[350];W[oo]WL[382];B[on]BL[347];W[nn]WL[365];B[om]BL[345];W[nm]WL[356];B[nl]BL[317];W[ml]WL[342];B[cq]BL[313];W[dq]WL[328];B[cp]BL[302];W[co]WL[325];B[bo]BL[295];W[cn]WL[322];B[bn]BL[292];W[bm]WL[319];B[ap]BL[276];W[cr]WL[312];B[br]BL[272];W[dr]WL[305];B[ip]BL[250];W[lp]WL[295];B[fo]BL[239];W[gq]WL[273];B[gp]BL[232];W[jq]WL[259];B[jp]BL[197];W[iq]WL[250];B[ko]BL[193];W[an]WL[247];B[ao]BL[187];W[aq]WL[242];B[bp]BL[181];W[am]WL[233]C[ manabufarm 15k?: 322 lol ];B[mk]BL[159];W[ll]WL[228];B[kl]BL[150];W[km]WL[218];B[lk]BL[132];W[mm]WL[203];B[jl]BL[117];W[jm]WL[197];B[im]BL[116];W[in]WL[168];B[jn]BL[111];W[il]WL[157];B[hm]BL[105];W[kn]WL[152];B[jo]BL[94];W[lo]WL[141];B[hn]BL[70];W[hl]WL[136];B[gl]BL[47];W[jk]WL[121];B[kk]BL[45];W[jj]WL[119];B[gk]BL[38];W[hj]WL[111];B[gj]BL[33];W[hi]WL[107];B[ei]BL[16];W[dj]WL[94];B[di]BL[12];W[ci]WL[88];B[ej]BL[600];W[dk]WL[84];B[jg]BL[594];W[gh]WL[50];B[gg]BL[550];W[fh]WL[45];B[fg]BL[543];W[eh]WL[41];B[dh]BL[511];W[eg]WL[34];B[cg]BL[505];W[ch]WL[579];B[dg]BL[499];W[ef]WL[568];B[ge]BL[464];W[gc]WL[549];B[hc]BL[454];W[gd]WL[539];B[hd]BL[453];W[gf]WL[531];B[hf]BL[446];W[ff]WL[527];B[hg]BL[443];W[fe]WL[522];B[he]BL[440];W[kj]WL[507];B[ek]BL[429];W[dl]WL[493];B[cm]BL[415];W[dm]WL[465];B[cl]BL[413];W[bl]WL[462];B[cj]BL[401];W[bj]WL[447];B[gb]BL[382];W[nk]WL[435];B[ol]BL[376];W[mj]WL[433];B[nh]BL[361];W[pb]WL[417];B[oc]BL[359];W[ob]WL[405];B[nb]BL[358];W[qb]WL[403];B[or]BL[343];W[nr]WL[396];B[qr]BL[316];W[fb]WL[389];B[fc]BL[308];W[fd]WL[381];B[hb]BL[581];W[qg]WL[347];B[qh]BL[575];W[rg]WL[327];B[rh]BL[569];W[sh]WL[315];B[si]BL[566];W[sg]WL[308];B[rj]BL[564];W[na]WL[295];B[pg]BL[562];W[of]WL[597];B[ma]BL[552];W[oa]WL[593];B[lb]BL[551];W[ok]WL[560];B[pk]BL[541];W[nj]WL[554];B[nf]BL[535];W[oi]WL[538];B[oh]BL[532];W[pj]WL[535];B[qk]BL[527];W[qj]WL[522];B[ri]BL[522];W[lh]WL[462];B[lg]BL[513];W[kg]WL[454];B[kf]BL[505];W[kh]WL[449];B[jh]BL[496];W[ji]WL[434];B[hh]BL[475];W[mh]WL[425];B[do]BL[424];W[dn]WL[401];B[eo]BL[420];W[ep]WL[398];B[el]BL[404];W[em]WL[387];B[fm]BL[401];W[hp]WL[350];B[ho]BL[392];W[hq]WL[347];B[hk]BL[346];W[kp]WL[324];B[ik]BL[311];W[lj]WL[307];B[il]BL[309];W[ni]WL[302];B[io]BL[588];W[pi]WL[297];B[rk]BL[585];W[ng]WL[286];B[mf]BL[581];W[fp]WL[264];B[go]BL[578];W[fa]WL[232];B[en]BL[572];W[ck]WL[228];B[df]BL[561];W[de]WL[594];B[ga]BL[559];W[gi]WL[585];B[fi]BL[553];W[ih]WL[545];B[ig]BL[551];W[ii]WL[543];B[ns]BL[541];W[lr]WL[534];B[mr]BL[525];W[mq]WL[529];B[ms]BL[523];W[ls]WL[527];B[os]BL[522];W[tt]WL[515];B[tt]BL[480]C[ manabufarm 15k?: 322 gg ];W[tt]WL[515]C[ akashe 17k?: akashe dead @ C4 akashe 17k?: akashe dead @ B2 akashe 17k?: akashe dead @ F17 manabufarm 15k?: manabufarm dead @ O4 akashe 17k?: Thank you for the game. akashe done ];TW[as][ar][ap][ao][al][ak][aj][ai][bs][br][bq][bp][bo][bn][bk][bi][cs][cq][cp][cm][cl][cj][ds][da][es][er][eq][ee][ed][ec][eb][ea][fs][fr][fq][fc][gs][gr][hs][hr][is][ir][js][jr][ks][kr][kq][ki][lq][ln][lm][li][mp][mo][mn][mi][np][no][oj][pa][qf][qe][qd][qa][rf][re][rd][rc][rb][ra][sf][se][sd][sc][sb][sa]TB[ae][ad][ac][ab][aa][bc][fn][fl][fk][fj][gn][gm][hl][ha][in][if][ie][id][ic][ib][ia][jf][je][jd][jc][jb][ja][ke][kd][kc][kb][ka][lf][le][ld][lc][la][me][md][mc][mb][ne][nd][ps][pn][pm][pl][qs][qp][qo][qn][qm][ql][rs][rr][rq][rp][ro][rn][rm][rl][ss][sr][sq][sp][so][sn][sm][sl][sk][sj]OS[js85tx])(;B[oq];W[or];B[op]C[JB: You have cutting points that you must protect, while he is starting to get a large territory on the right.]TR[oj][ph]))(;W[mp]C[JB: The most common joseki. It works well with D4 and B12. ]))(;W[db]C[JB: This is stronger. It is sente because if he ignores it you can kill him with B18.];B[cb]C[JB: He protects...];W[jp]C[JB Now YOU get the first move on the lower side.]))(;W[cg]C[JB: Much stronger. A14 and B12 are miai.]))(;W[cg]C[JB: This protects the cut at D15. See variations](;B[de]C[JB: White C13 means that black can't cut.];W[ee];B[df];W[eg]C[JB: The cutting stone is dead.])(;B[bg]C[JB: Are you concerned about this? It is a 1-point move.];W[ch]C[JB: He gets one point in territory; you increase the value of your wall by 2 or 3 points. This is great for white.])))(;W[cd];B[dc];W[ec];B[eb];W[fc];B[fb];W[gc]C[JB: Now your wall faces virgin territory on the left side, but his wall in the upper right is being limited by your stone at G17.]))(;W[pb]C[JB: Grab a corner and threaten to wipe out his eye space. This point is sente for both of you, so it is bigger than it looks]))(;B[qc]C[JB: Your opponent could have played this. It takes the corner, undermines your eye space, and indirectly protects the cut at P17.];W[oc];B[nc];W[ob];B[nb];W[pb];B[qb]))(;W[qc]C[JB: The aforementioned pros always continue with this, AFAIK.]))
(;CA[Windows-1252]NB[14]LT[]RR[Normal]GM[1]AP[MultiGo:4.4.4]SZ[19]NW[12]DT[2014-02-17] PC[IGS]PB[manabufarm]BR[15k?]PW[akashe]WR[17k?]KM[6.5]TM[600]RE[W+22.5]MULTIGOGM[0] ;B[pp]BL[597];W[dp]WL[594];B[pc]BL[592];W[dd]WL[585];B[oj]BL[586];W[pe]WL[576];B[oe] BL[577];W[pd]WL[552];B[od]BL[570];W[pf]WL[547];B[ph]BL[565] (;W[og]WL[536]C[Loose. See vars.];B[mg]BL[555];W[qc]WL[528] (;B[nc]BL[534]LB[pb:a]C[Bad habit. This gives W the free atari (a). See var.] (;W[nq]WL[519]C[See var.];B[cc]BL[522];W[dc]WL[497];B[cd]BL[511];W[ce]WL[495];B[be] BL[505];W[cf]WL[489];B[bf]BL[499] (;W[bg]WL[486]C[Standard beginner mistake. Mostly, it's because you are not familiar with this shape. (Plus a bit of greed and carelessness, not aware of your cut.) See var.] (;B[ag]BL[468]C[Ridiculous. See var.] (;W[ah]WL[443]C[Ridiculous. See var.] (;B[bd]BL[459]C[Ridiculous. See var.];W[bh]WL[436];B[af]BL[443];W[cb]WL[434];B[bb] BL[438] (;W[ca]WL[430]C[Bad habit. See var.];B[ba]BL[424]LB[ca:a]C[Because of your descend (a), you give B this free sente. You can see (a) is bad.] ;W[db]WL[425];B[np]BL[380];W[pq]WL[404];B[qq]BL[356];W[op]WL[395] (;B[pr]BL[352]C[Ridiculous. See var.];W[oq]WL[390];B[po]BL[350]C[Terrible move by B.] ;W[oo]WL[382]TR[np][po]C[Very good. B crushes his own shape here.];B[on]BL[347] ;W[nn]WL[365];B[om]BL[345];W[nm]WL[356];B[nl]BL[317];W[ml]WL[342];B[cq]BL[313];W[dq] WL[328];B[cp]BL[302];W[co]WL[325];B[bo]BL[295];W[cn]WL[322];B[bn]BL[292];W[bm]WL[319] ;B[ap]BL[276];W[cr]WL[312];B[br]BL[272];W[dr]WL[305];B[ip]BL[250];W[lp]WL[295];B[fo] BL[239];W[gq]WL[273];B[gp]BL[232];W[jq]WL[259];B[jp]BL[197];W[iq]WL[250];B[ko]BL[193] ;W[an]WL[247];B[ao]BL[187];W[aq]WL[242];B[bp]BL[181];W[am]WL[233];B[mk]BL[159];W[ll] WL[228];B[kl]BL[150];W[km]WL[218];B[lk]BL[132];W[mm]WL[203];B[jl]BL[117];W[jm]WL[197] ;B[im]BL[116];W[in]WL[168];B[jn]BL[111];W[il]WL[157];B[hm]BL[105];W[kn]WL[152];B[jo] BL[94];W[lo]WL[141];B[hn]BL[70];W[hl]WL[136];B[gl]BL[47];W[jk]WL[121];B[kk]BL[45] ;W[jj]WL[119];B[gk]BL[38];W[hj]WL[111];B[gj]BL[33];W[hi]WL[107];B[ei]BL[16];W[dj] WL[94];B[di]BL[12];W[ci]WL[88];B[ej]BL[600];W[dk]WL[84];B[jg]BL[594];W[gh]WL[50] ;B[gg]BL[550];W[fh]WL[45];B[fg]BL[543];W[eh]WL[41];B[dh]BL[511];W[eg]WL[34];B[cg] BL[505];W[ch]WL[579];B[dg]BL[499];W[ef]WL[568];B[ge]BL[464];W[gc]WL[549];B[hc]BL[454] ;W[gd]WL[539];B[hd]BL[453];W[gf]WL[531];B[hf]BL[446];W[ff]WL[527];B[hg]BL[443];W[fe] WL[522];B[he]BL[440];W[kj]WL[507];B[ek]BL[429];W[dl]WL[493];B[cm]BL[415];W[dm]WL[465] ;B[cl]BL[413];W[bl]WL[462];B[cj]BL[401];W[bj]WL[447];B[gb]BL[382];W[nk]WL[435];B[ol] BL[376];W[mj]WL[433];B[nh]BL[361];W[pb]WL[417];B[oc]BL[359];W[ob]WL[405];B[nb]BL[358] ;W[qb]WL[403];B[or]BL[343];W[nr]WL[396];B[qr]BL[316];W[fb]WL[389];B[fc]BL[308];W[fd] WL[381];B[hb]BL[581];W[qg]WL[347];B[qh]BL[575];W[rg]WL[327];B[rh]BL[569];W[sh]WL[315] ;B[si]BL[566];W[sg]WL[308];B[rj]BL[564];W[na]WL[295];B[pg]BL[562];W[of]WL[597];B[ma] BL[552];W[oa]WL[593];B[lb]BL[551];W[ok]WL[560];B[pk]BL[541];W[nj]WL[554];B[nf]BL[535] ;W[oi]WL[538];B[oh]BL[532];W[pj]WL[535];B[qk]BL[527];W[qj]WL[522];B[ri]BL[522];W[lh] WL[462];B[lg]BL[513];W[kg]WL[454];B[kf]BL[505];W[kh]WL[449];B[jh]BL[496];W[ji]WL[434] ;B[hh]BL[475];W[mh]WL[425];B[do]BL[424];W[dn]WL[401];B[eo]BL[420];W[ep]WL[398];B[el] BL[404];W[em]WL[387];B[fm]BL[401];W[hp]WL[350];B[ho]BL[392];W[hq]WL[347];B[hk]BL[346] ;W[kp]WL[324];B[ik]BL[311];W[lj]WL[307];B[il]BL[309];W[ni]WL[302];B[io]BL[588];W[pi] WL[297];B[rk]BL[585];W[ng]WL[286];B[mf]BL[581];W[fp]WL[264];B[go]BL[578];W[fa]WL[232] ;B[en]BL[572];W[ck]WL[228];B[df]BL[561];W[de]WL[594];B[ga]BL[559];W[gi]WL[585];B[fi] BL[553];W[ih]WL[545];B[ig]BL[551];W[ii]WL[543];B[ns]BL[541];W[lr]WL[534];B[mr]BL[525] ;W[mq]WL[529];B[ms]BL[523];W[ls]WL[527];B[os]BL[522];W[tt]WL[515];B[tt]BL[480];W[tt] WL[515];OS[js85tx]TB[lc][ie][ae][ad][ac][ab][aa][bc][fn][fl][fk][fj][gn][gm][hl] [ha][in][if][id][ic][ib][ia][jf][je][jd][jc][jb][ke][kd][kc][kb][ka][lf][le][ld] [ja][la][me][md][mc][mb][ne][nd][ps][pn][pm][pl][qs][qp][qo][qn][qm][ql][rr][rq] [rp][ro][rn][rm][rl][ss][sr][sq][sp][so][sn][sm][sl][sk][sj][rs]TW[sd][sc][cp][sa] [as][ar][ap][ao][al][ak][aj][ai][bs][br][bq][bp][bo][bn][bk][bi][sb][cs][cq][cm] [cl][cj][ds][da][es][er][eq][ee][ed][ec][eb][ea][fs][fr][fq][fc][gs][gr][hs][hr] [is][ir][js][jr][ks][kr][kq][ki][lq][ln][lm][li][mp][np][mo][mn][mi][no][oj][pa] [qf][qe][qd][qa][rf][re][rd][rc][rb][ra][sf][se]) (;B[oo];W[oq];B[qp])) (;W[db]C[Just connect is better.])) (;B[bh];W[af];B[cg]C[Huge ko. W cannot connect. See continuation.];W[ag];B[ai];W[bd] ;B[ae];W[bc])) (;W[bh])) (;B[cg]C[Now W has no good reply locally.])) (;W[cg]C[Extend is correct. B does not want to crawl on the 2nd line. B is crawling on the 2nd line because B must make life. As long as B continues to crawl on the 2nd line, you are very happy to play the 3rd line.
B will not crawl here any more. See continuation.] ;B[db];W[eb];B[cb];W[fc]C[One joseki.])) (;W[pb]LB[nc:a]C[B made the non-sense move of (a). You must atari here.];B[oc];W[ob])) (;B[pb];W[qb];B[nc])) (;W[of]C[If you want to get out, make this tight turn, not your loose kosumi. See also 3rd var.]) (;W[qc]C[Very big sente.]))
well.. Q10 or R10 is more common.. with p10 you are on 6th line and invading is simply too easy.
too early for 3-3 (ready more books on san-san invasion)
see the correct joseki for 3-3 invasion
r4 or simply p4 would be enough.. what you played created a lot of cutting points in your own shape.
again... better ways of invading that side.. since it is empty 3-3 invasions give good wall to opponent.
playing on 3rd line would maybe be better. influence is not needed that much since white has weak walls that have a lot of aji.
