Uberdude wrote:Just a few quick comments:
- I'm not sure g15 was good, how about o4?
- Don't like s9 as it makes black stronger. In the normal Chinese when this happens black already has q14 so there was not so much chance to come in the right side so you don't mind making that area stronger, not you do. o5 instead?
- p7 needed?
- k16 was poor, if o17 harder for white.
- s16 wrong order, r14 could o18 turn and white will have to live in gote (yeah you have clamp but that's small).
- c11 kick?
- e5 soft
- d9????? maybe reduce now, or f16.
- b8 can he tenuki?
For G15, I was concerned about black moving the stone, but it does seem small in comparison.
How would you follow up with O5, assuming black responds? I took P7 later because I didn't want black to build too much strength in sente, but I'm not sure.
Regarding C11, I thought after the kick that black E11 would be annoying, and there would be more aji for the other black stone also. I'm very uncertain about the position, though, as it spirals into many many variations.
What do you recommend instead of E5? Inside shoulder hit? B7? I agree he can tenuki b8 instead and I probably should have reduced directly.