Hey everyone! I haven't played many games on this server so I think I might be a little stronger than 17k. I just got finished playing this game and I think it's the best I've ever played. I've been doing more tsumego than ever and I feel like something has clicked recently. Do you think you could point out some good/bad things I'm doing so I have an idea what to work on? Thanks so much!
Review Request (17k IGS)
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Review Request (17k IGS)
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Sorry, I'm not sure exactly how to post itEdLee wrote:Hi Tony,
Welcome.
( Not seeing an easy way to get the SGF over here, on iOS... )
Also, were you B or W ?
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Got it!EdLee wrote:Hi Tony,
Thanks for the info as B, and the sgf link.
You want to copy & paste the SGF text exactly in between [SGF] tags.
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Hi Tony,
Did you know this completes a local joseki ? 
Feels slow. Consider to approach top left corner.
Good to study a joseki here -- do you know the sequence after W hanes S16 ?
o17. The corner is less valuable than the outside, in this case.
Proverbs: 
Still o17. Study what happens if Black o17 hanes, then double hanes N18.
o16 (same reasons as above).
o18 hane; B N18 double hane.
Big mistake.
Big miss. Find the sequence to kill top right corner. 
C13.
Feels a bit slow & heavy. D12.
Consider E3.
Very slow & heavy. Consider E3.
OK to just reply at R8.
OK to just turn and take cash, R8.
Disaster shape for W. F17.
Slow. B15.
Slow. Tenuki.
Unreasonable to expect W to submissively connect at H16.
W would counter attack.
Very bad feeling; bad habit
( you were so ahead in this game that this didn't matter here, but it's completely wrong. )
Study Toothpaste .
114 Pass (neutral area).
Many bigger moves; ( examples: L16, J3, etc. )
Congrats.Got it!
Did you know this completes a local joseki ? Feels slow. Consider to approach top left corner. Good to study a joseki here -- do you know the sequence after W hanes S16 ? o17. The corner is less valuable than the outside, in this case.Proverbs:
Still o17. Study what happens if Black o17 hanes, then double hanes N18. o16 (same reasons as above). o18 hane; B N18 double hane. Big mistake. Big miss. Find the sequence to kill top right corner. C13. Feels a bit slow & heavy. D12. Consider E3. Very slow & heavy. Consider E3. OK to just reply at R8. OK to just turn and take cash, R8. Disaster shape for W. F17. Slow. B15. Slow. Tenuki. Unreasonable to expect W to submissively connect at H16. W would counter attack. Very bad feeling; bad habit( you were so ahead in this game that this didn't matter here, but it's completely wrong. )
Study Toothpaste .
114 Pass (neutral area).Many bigger moves; ( examples: L16, J3, etc. )