Atsumi review: Araban vs Shaddy from the L19 tournament!

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Atsumi review: Araban vs Shaddy from the L19 tournament!

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This was a great game with a lot of fighting so I thought I would review it. They played a tricky variation in the opening and Araban didn't play correctly (but he thought the result was worse then it actually was). This "forced" Araban to play violently and exciting throughout all game, so I hope you all will enjoy watching the review of this great game! :)

Please feel free to leave any kind of question or comment about the review!


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Re: Atsumi review: Araban vs Shaddy from the L19 tournament!

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If you use the [sgf-full] tag instead of the [sgf] tag the viewer will use a wider layout with a variation tree that's easier to navigate.
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Re: Atsumi review: Araban vs Shaddy from the L19 tournament!

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fwiffo wrote:If you use the [sgf-full] tag instead of the [sgf] tag the viewer will use a wider layout with a variation tree that's easier to navigate.


Thanks!
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Fascinating review, btw.
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I can't download the sgf :-(
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freegame wrote:I can't download the sgf :-(
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You can get around this by quoting the original post and copy-pasting the SGF into Notepad. :)
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Re: Atsumi review: Araban vs Shaddy from the L19 tournament!

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The download problem a limitation of the SGF viewer at the moment (I intend to fix it when I have time, but it's sorta complicated). As a workaround, you can add the SGF file as an attachment to the post, then embed it by URL instead of pasting the SGF contents between the tags, like so:



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Re: Atsumi review: Araban vs Shaddy from the L19 tournament!

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thanks a ton for the review! there's a ton of stuff here i missed, and i look forward to studying this game more.
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That is a very nice review.

I have only a minor note: please write "than" to compare ("This is better than the game."). "Then" means a chronological followup ("Better peep here first, then extend.").
A good system naturally covers all corner cases without further effort.
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Re: Atsumi review: Araban vs Shaddy from the L19 tournament!

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Harleqin wrote:That is a very nice review.

I have only a minor note: please write "than" to compare ("This is better than the game."). "Then" means a chronological followup ("Better peep here first, then extend.").


Thank you, I'll be sure to remember this! :)
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