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Please review for black (7k game)

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D15 was the winning move for white at end game. Idk why I thought I already took that... just being dumb.

Any comment on gameplay would be appreciated!

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Re: Please review for black (7k game)

Post by Joaz Banbeck »

In the last corner, your choice of a pincer was very good. But then you let him establish himself too easily by provoking a sharp fight with R4. You played joseki, but it was a joseki that dissipated your advantage there.

When you have the advantage on a large scale like that, you want to keep up the pressure, never engaging in small fights, but rather making the fights large so that your neighboring stones ( here circled ) can be brought to bear.

Something like the move below keeps the pressure on.
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[go]$$c Position at move 44
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$$ | . X . . O O X . . . . . . O . B . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . O O . . . . . . B . . . . |
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$$ | . . . . . . O O . B . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . . O . O X O . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . O . . X X X B . . . . . . X O . . |
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$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
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Re: Please review for black (7k game)

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In response to :w1:, I want to try :b2:. Black's two stones in the upper right are strong. Black does not need to respond there.
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[go]$$Wcm1
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . X X X X . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . X O O X O X . O , . . . . . , X . . |
$$ | . X . . O O X . . . . . . 1 . X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . O 2 . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
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$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
Especially with the low stone in the lower right, Black should play high in the lower left at :b1: below. If White invades, :b3: and :b5: are standard plays the effortlessly start erasing White's center influence.
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[go]$$Bcm1
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$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . X X X X . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . X O O X O X . O , . . . . . , X . . |
$$ | . X . . O O X . . . . . . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . O O . . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
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$$ | . . O . . . . 5 . . . . . . . . . . . |
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$$ | . . . O . . . 1 . 4 . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . O . . X . . 3 2 . . . . . X . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
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$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
Look at how open the lower right is and then play :b1: below. If White plays :w2: and :w4:, jump to :b5:. Do not regret giving up the lower left, if you can get the lower right.
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[go]$$Bcm1
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . X X X X . . . . . . . . O . . . . |
$$ | . X O O X O X . O , . . . . . , X . . |
$$ | . X . . O O X . . . . . . O . X . . . |
$$ | . . X O . . O O . . . . . . X . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
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$$ | . . O . . . . . 5 . . . . . . 9 . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O . O 4 O 1 , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . O . 8 X 2 X X . . . . . . X . . . |
$$ | . . . X . 6 3 . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . 7 . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
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Re: Please review for black (7k game)

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Thank you both for the review. I found that I'm very bad at moyo games even against people my own level, but this gives me some great insight.
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