thequietcenter (10k) vs james70739 (6k) - please review.

Post your games here for other members to critique your play.
Post Reply
thequietcenter
Dies with sente
Posts: 87
Joined: Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:55 pm
Rank: 9k
GD Posts: 0
OGS: thequietcenter
Has thanked: 8 times
Been thanked: 2 times

thequietcenter (10k) vs james70739 (6k) - please review.

Post by thequietcenter »

Hello, I played as Black and lost this game. I would appreciate a review:

https://online-go.com/game/39157321

Because this person was 4 stones stronger than me, I have no idea if they were just toying with me or playing seriously. They didnt blow me off the board the way I expected.
My OGS profile is https://online-go.com/user/view/1084709
My twitch stream is https://www.twitch.tv/thedeepself
My flashcard software for baduk is www.may69.com/flash-goban
User avatar
Joaz Banbeck
Judan
Posts: 5546
Joined: Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:30 am
Rank: 1D AGA
GD Posts: 1512
Kaya handle: Test
Location: Banbeck Vale
Has thanked: 1080 times
Been thanked: 1434 times

Re: thequietcenter (10k) vs james70739 (6k) - please review.

Post by Joaz Banbeck »

Help make L19 more organized. Make an index: https://lifein19x19.com/viewtopic.php?f=14&t=5207
User avatar
Joaz Banbeck
Judan
Posts: 5546
Joined: Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:30 am
Rank: 1D AGA
GD Posts: 1512
Kaya handle: Test
Location: Banbeck Vale
Has thanked: 1080 times
Been thanked: 1434 times

Re: thequietcenter (10k) vs james70739 (6k) - please review.

Post by Joaz Banbeck »

The game looks decent until move 34. You have played a solid, though perhaps unenterprising game, with no obvious faults.

But move 34 is way too small. It is worth 4 or 5 points, and is barely sente.
Click Here To Show Diagram Code
[go]$$ Position at move 34
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . X . . X . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O . . . . . , . . . X . X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . O . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . X X O . . . O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O , O . . X O O O . . . . X . O . |
$$ | . . . O . 1 . X X . X X . X . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
There are bigger moves available. There are three corners unresolved.
Other than that, the perimeter is spoken for and it is time to extend into the center.

To put it in perspective, imagine a white move like this:
Click Here To Show Diagram Code
[go]$$ Big sente
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . X . . X . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O . . . . . , . . . X . X . W . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . O . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . X X O . . . O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O , O . . X O O O . . . . X . O . |
$$ | . . . O . . . X X . X X . X . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
...or this:
Click Here To Show Diagram Code
[go]$$ Grabs at least 10 points of center territory
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . X . . X . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O . . . . . , . . . X . X . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . O . . . . W . . O . . |
$$ | . X X O . . . O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O , O . . X O O O . . . . X . O . |
$$ | . . . O . . . X X . X X . X . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]

On move 34, you should be looking at moves like these:

Click Here To Show Diagram Code
[go]$$ Position at move 34
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . e X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . X . . X . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . O . . . . . , . . . X . X . c . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . d . O . . . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . O . . . . b . . O . . |
$$ | . X X O . . . O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O , O . . X O O O . . . . X . O . |
$$ | . a . O . . . X X . X X . X . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
A) Bigger than it looks. But gote.

B) Destroy his potential moyo.

C) Big, sort of gote, starts to look senteish when the temperature drops.

D) Intrude into his potential moyo, threaten to build your own.

E) Small, but strongly sente.


There is a common sequence that starts with E:
Click Here To Show Diagram Code
[go]$$ Commmon invasion when you have something around C11
$$ ---------------------------------------
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . 2 1 X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . 4 O . . X . . X . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . 3 . O . . . . . , . . . X . X . . . |
$$ | . . 5 6 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . 7 O . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . . |
$$ | . . B . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . , . . . . . , . . . . . , . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . . X . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . O . . . . . . . O . . |
$$ | . X X O . . . O . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . O , O . . X O O O . . . . X . O . |
$$ | . . . O . . . X X . X X . X . . X . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ | . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
$$ ---------------------------------------[/go]
Help make L19 more organized. Make an index: https://lifein19x19.com/viewtopic.php?f=14&t=5207
thequietcenter
Dies with sente
Posts: 87
Joined: Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:55 pm
Rank: 9k
GD Posts: 0
OGS: thequietcenter
Has thanked: 8 times
Been thanked: 2 times

Re: thequietcenter (10k) vs james70739 (6k) - please review.

Post by thequietcenter »

Joaz Banbeck wrote: move 34 is way too small. It is worth 4 or 5 points, and is barely sente.
Thanks for this feedback. Looking at the moves White could've played helps me think of better moves. And I dont know why I wasnt thinking about locking in an open corner.
My OGS profile is https://online-go.com/user/view/1084709
My twitch stream is https://www.twitch.tv/thedeepself
My flashcard software for baduk is www.may69.com/flash-goban
Post Reply