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by jbergmark » Wed Apr 06, 2011 8:14 am
As we are both beginners, I'm sure there are a ton of very bad plays made on both sides in this game, but I would appreciate any advice anyone could give. We have found in the past that about 4 handicap stones tends to give us a close game.
This was a pretty slow game (45 minutes each side, and I added time for my friend a couple times so they wouldn't feel rushed) and it felt like a close game.
I've removed the chat, and replaced it with my thoughts as I played many of the moves.
http://www.lifein19x19.com/forum/download/file.php?id=844
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by EdLee » Wed Apr 06, 2011 3:59 pm
Continue to play. Try to finish 100 games as quickly as you can (9x9, 13x13, or 19x19 all OK).
Post a game here for review every once in a while. Good luck!
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by jbergmark » Thu Apr 07, 2011 1:37 pm
Thank you very much for the review!