http://www.wattpad.com/2243059-the-rose ... rsion?d=ud
Criticism would be much appreciated!
Story i wrote
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Re: Story i wrote
Very nice. The start feels a bit off, but it settles into the right kind of tempo after that.
BTW, this might be better suited to the Creative Writing section, instead of the Off Topic section
BTW, this might be better suited to the Creative Writing section, instead of the Off Topic section