Hi Mongus,
Congrats on the win.
If B plays perfectly, W has no chance.
Except for obvious bad moves, like A1, it's OK.
Good.
You were scared. No reason to be; it is
White who is under pressure here to live.
Look for the a severe plan to pressure W.
Example: B R18 hane, W S18 block; B R16 atari, W S17 connects; B Q18 connects --
W is not alive.
Bad habit. o16 fix your shape directly.
Don't Help W make good shape and live 100% !
(
,
,
) Study this sequence:
- The - exchange fixes ALL of W's weakness here;
- W makes good shape with ;
- W is 100% alive with ;
- After , there's still a cut P17 in B's shape ;
- After , there's STILL a cut P17 !
That's why
is not good; instead, fix your weakness directly at o16.
You already spent THREE moves here (
,
,
),
and you still haven't fixed your cuts !
Again:
at o16 directly !
This makes little sense: you force W to capture More of your stones.
Atari P16 instead -- limit your loss.
Gote.
W should tenuki.
Too small, too slow. Completely missing the big picture,
completely not looking at the whole board, global situation --
both Black and White.
Finally, a little tenuki.
Too small, too slow. Why reply to
? The board is still very open !
Bill calls this
Follow-itis --
you're blindly followng White ( he does the same, sometimes ).
Look at the whole board: play what you think is the biggest move.
Study
,
again: would you still play them now ?
Slow.
Follow-itis. Locally, J12 is faster.
Soft. Example: B kicks E17, W extends F16, B jumps D14 --
first make W heavy, then attack it.
Again, you were scared. W jumped into
your moyo,
into
your area of strength -- it is White who should be under pressure,
under attack !
Study and compare the
variation above with the current game result.
Slow.
Follow-itis. Missing the whole board.
Slow.
Follow-itis. Missing the whole board.
Slow.
Follow-itis. Missing the whole board.
Someone finally wakes up.
You tell us why this is not good.
is not a good move; you're happy to reply (e.g. D6 ).
Follow-itis. Compare D11 with D6 -- which is bigger ?
Follow-itis.
We see many of the same recurring problems from previous games,
and up to here.
?!
, I'm not sure this is that strong a result :
black played elsewhere, but that was a mistake from black. Where should black play?
?
- 
accomplished.
), would you still play