Flattery goes a long way so here are some comments. Before we ever get to 38 though...
On 16 you comment that you don't want to go for influence because of the star points. However, let's remember how JF is always harping on that thickness does not equal influence and vice versa. I always think that when the opponent plays early on tengen, one of our objectives is to try to make that an inefficient play. Fighting with multiple groups is not the way we try to do that!

So I liked your solid connection (or the diagonal play at P6) better. BTW, don't forget to atari at N2 in your variation before connecting with L4. Don't give him the hane at M2 for free!
But now it gets exciting, and not in a good way it seems to me. Do you have time to play 24? If Black had played 25 at L2, can White win the fight?
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The same question goes for Black 25 and 27. It seems to me that White is playing with fire here and should play on the lower side instead.
Is White 26 bad shape? If Black plays 27 at R5, White has to give up 26 or allow Black to punch through at Q6 with 29.
Finally it is White's turn though. Black 33 seems a tremendous overplay to me. Shouldn't White simply use 34 to play out at J3? what does Black do now?
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I think the real question arises if Black plays 33 as shown below. Should White cut at 'a' and revert to the game? Since white needs to add a move in the corner if he can't catch some Black stones on the outside, I think White is more at risk than Black in the game. I think that White should prefer to simply live inside, wait for Black to connect 'a' somehow and then protect the lower left corner. The pressure will then be on Black to justify his center stones.
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