(;GM[1]FF[4]CA[UTF-8]AP[CGoban:3]ST[2]
RU[Japanese]SZ[19]KM[6.50]TM[1200]OT[5x60 byo-yomi]
PW[Fedya]PB[Pagni]WR[7k]BR[7k]DT[2016-07-16]PC[The KGS Go Server at
http://www.gokgs.com/]C[This might be a case of too many doctors making the patient even sicker, but ...
... I'll continue on my original post:
1. Have a purpose (strategy)
2. See available moves for the purpose (technique/early pruning)
3. Read out the consequence(s) (tactics)
4. Evaluate the result: is the purpose met?
5. Don't switch purposes halfway if there is no pertinent reason to do so
I'll try to identify your "problem" as you perceive it by indicating which of these 5 go wrong (most)
Perhaps we'll identify another "problem" in the process]RE[B+Resign]
;B[pd]BL[1198.346]
;W[dp]WL[1196.761]
;B[pq]BL[1188.167]
;W[dc]WL[1192.536]C[(I don't usually comment on the first 4 moves)]
;B[po]BL[1185.941]LB[nc:1][ce:A][qf:2][cj:B][qj:3][cn:C][fq:D][jq:E]C[Possible purposes:
a) develop your own sphere of influence
b) reduce the opponent's sphere of influence
for a) there are moves like A, B, C, D, E
for b) there are moves like 1, 2, 3 and ... E]
;W[jq]WL[1184.959]C[E is a move that accomplishes both purposes, the ideal point.
Well done!]
;B[cn]BL[1182.996]C[You have several possible purposes here
a) attack/surround Black's lonely stone
b) defend your corner stone by linking up with the side stone
c) don't bother and play elsewhere
c) is not consistent with your earlier move: you developed this side and now you would abandon it
for a) we have several pincers available
for b) there is the one space extension or the knight's move]
(;W[cl]WL[1167.869]C[You decide this pincer is best: it attacks the stone AND kind of develops your upper left in a large sense]
;B[bp]BL[1177.956]LB[de:E][dn:C][en:B][fp:D][cq:A]C[Black defends his stone, but we all know that this is not a pattern.
Instead of blacking out on Black's original play, we simply need to think about the situation and find out why this is not an established move.
Basic thinking
a) White can continue pressuring the black stones, even if they have defended themselves. Moves A, B
b) White can try to link up & surround. Moves B, C
c) White can defend his weakest stone. Moves A, D
d) White can decide not to care and play elsewhere. for example E
Pattern thinking
What does Black usually do? Jump in the corner.
Why? sacrifice a stone to get easy territory, or link up with territory (var)
Why? Because our pincer denied him a base.
What if we play A in the corner now? Tactics needed. See var.
What if we play B? Tactics needed. See var
A seems best. More importantly: A is consistent with the original plan.
]
(;W[gq]WL[1154.986]C[This is the first move I'm not sure of. Perhaps I should have played C3 instead? But I thought this went well with the other two white stones on the bottom.
***
Indeed this is your first "bad move" Good analysis/feeling !
You chose to link up your stones and actually chose a good move for that.
The move was good but the purpose was wrong. More importantly, you changed your plan midgear.
]
;B[cq]BL[1174.717]LB[nc:C][de:B][qj:D][cl:A]C[Black settles easily and the purpose of A is lost
Now you must again decide:
a) continue with sth here
b) or play elsewhere
Now that Black has settled and your original plan has goofed, playing elsewhere seems like a good idea
B, C, D come to mind
]
;W[nc]WL[1149.56]C[At this point, I knew not to play D3. So I decided to play something bigger.
********
Very good thinking: your plan has not succeeded and you play elsewhere. Moreover , you picked a decent move at that]
;B[oc]BL[1171.918]
;W[nd]WL[1142.958]C[Good technique]
;B[pg]BL[1169.125]
;W[jd]WL[1117.659]C[You decide to link up your stones on a big scale and this is a good move to do so]
;B[dq]BL[1166.533]LB[cl:A]SQ[gq][jq]C[Now how is my group on the bottom going to look?
****
Here comes the last part of my analysis:
What is Black doing here? He's adding a stone to a strong group and eating your stone in the process.
What kind of stone is your stone? A lone stone without purpose: it doesn't provide safety for any of your stones, nor pressure on any of Black's. Your marked stones are far enough from the action and have a base. They have no business protecting that lone stone
Your weakest stone is A but even that one is becoming a waste stone, now that Black is strong and overinvests in this area.
And since you were playing elsewhere, building the top, you have every reason to continue with that plan.
]
(;W[ep]WL[1099.351]C[Suddenly however, you again switch strategies and decide to defend this stone, which you had previously abandoned.]
;B[eq]BL[1122.68]
;W[fp]WL[1086.231]LB[dm:A]C[Although the plan was bad, you continue and possibly that's better than again shifting plans because now A becomes a surrounding move again, be it not a severe one as Black is already alive]
;B[cj]BL[1120.183]
;W[qk]WL[1047.33]LB[cf:A][qi:B][qm:C]C[I decided to sacrifice the C8 stone and make certain Black wouldn't get the entire right side of the board by playing between the two Black groups.
****
You had 4 options
a) surround the lower left
b) defend your attacked stone
c) play elsewhere to build
d) play elsewhere to reduce
You chose d) which deviates from plan 1 (harrass the lower left) and also from plan 2 (build the upper side, for which A would have been perfect)
Moreover, there is a problem with the move you chose for your purpose: if Black attacks your stone, it can only make a very cramped base at B or C (or, as we will see, your base making move is technically bad)
]
;B[qm]BL[1111.119]
;W[qh]WL[1024.859]C[You choose this move for making a base and although it is playable, in special circumstances, it is mostly wrong:]
;B[qg]BL[1039.826]LB[cf:A]SQ[qh][cl][dp]C[Black gets a perfect attack & defense move and we cannot say you have a base.
As another forum member has pointed out, you next make a couple of "bad diagonals", i.e. poor technical choices for your purpose.
In conclusion, when looking back at the 5 aspects that could be poorly developed:
a) your purposes are mostly well defined
b) the techniques you choose are good when stones don't touch, but in close combat you pick bad moves
c) I cannot judge your reading, but I sense you don't read very far, maybe 3 moves. That's not a big problem for now
d) the evaluation of your reading is also hard to judge but I think it gets blurred by the technical choices you make underway in your reading
e) by far the biggest problem however seems to be that you change purposes midgear and this makes your stones add up awkwardly
All the marked moves have little or no purpose and all were the consequence of inconsistent plans. The most obvious place where a White stone should be, A, is also empty due to inconsistent plans.
But I've observed something else: most of the time you make good strategic and technical choices. There is more confidence to be taken from your game than distress. I really think you should simply have more confidence in yourself. You may end up at the other end of the scale: stubbornly carrying on with a bad plan. But this will teach you things and in a more concerted manner.
Good luck!]
;W[pi]WL[1010.766]
;B[cg]BL[1033.118]
;W[mq]WL[976.461]C[I think the choice was either somewhere around here, or approaching Black from the D17 stone, so something like C15.]
;B[cd]BL[986.523]
;W[ed]WL[956.013]C[I have a feeling this is a problem, and that I should have played C17 instead. However, I saw myself playing there, followed by Black invading around G16/H16 and white getting nothing good out of it.]
;B[cc]BL[982.846]
;W[ge]WL[947.565]C[I'm consciously trying to take more territory at the top instead of playing something defensive like C18.]
;B[ej]BL[980.292]
;W[em]WL[942.946]C[The point of this was to extend from the bottom group and force Black to prevent me from saving C8, giving me sente to expand the bottom group more.]
;B[dm]BL[977.373]
;W[fm]WL[940.023]
;B[dl]BL[975.397]
;W[mo]WL[904.914]
;B[om]BL[912.073]
;W[ni]WL[885.332]
;B[jj]BL[901.751]
;W[mm]WL[848.783]
;B[nl]BL[897.586]C[Black, I think, erred here, and should have played something like K8 instead.]
;W[jl]WL[833.533]
;B[mk]BL[893.913]
;W[rl]WL[825.54]
;B[rm]BL[885.4]C[At this point, I counted; during the game I thought I was behind by about 20. Looking at it now; I'll get maybe 40 on the bottom, and maybe 30 on the top; add in the right center and komi and I'll be around 80. Black has 45-50 on the left, 20-25 in the top right, and 20 on the bottom right. So Black should be around 90. I'm behind, but not that badly, I don't think. Well, there is a weakness at M16 for me.]
;W[qc]WL[756.752]C[I felt I needed to do something to reduce Black, and this is the only weakness I could find.]
;B[qd]BL[871.591]
(;W[ob]WL[752.588]
;B[pc]BL[868.771]
;W[pb]WL[750.18]
;B[qb]BL[867.545]
(;W[rg]WL[727.514]
;B[rf]BL[864.567]
;W[rh]WL[725.043]
;B[hc]BL[852.081]C[This is the move I had no idea was a weakness.]
;W[jc]WL[675.971]C[I think I should have played something like H16, but I was also worried about the weakness at M16. Black can sacrifice the H17 stone and use M16 to attack the stones on the right, severely reducing my moyo that way.]
;B[he]BL[846.058]
;W[ie]WL[673.823]
;B[hf]BL[842.797]
;W[hd]WL[672.282]
;B[gd]BL[841.296]
;W[id]WL[670.639]
;B[fc]BL[839.72]C[Black, I think, should have played at F15, since the ladder is in Black's favor.]
;W[fd]WL[666.005]
;B[ec]BL[837.065]
;W[db]WL[658.279]
;B[gc]BL[832.405]
;W[dd]WL[655.919]
;B[fe]BL[830.195]
;W[gf]WL[653.704]
;B[ff]BL[828.177]
;W[gg]WL[651.482]
;B[ib]BL[824.51]
;W[jb]WL[641.247]
;B[eb]BL[822.189]C[Only now did I notice that the group in the top left might be in trouble.]
;W[ga]WL[635.594]
;B[da]BL[810.832]
;W[cb]WL[626.488]
;B[fg]BL[799.251]
;W[gh]WL[616.57]
;B[de]BL[794.75]
;W[bb]WL[600.452]
;B[bc]BL[769.268]
;W[ee]WL[583.019]
;B[df]BL[765.292]C[I realized there's no longer any way for me to save the stones in the top left, so I resigned.])
(;W[rc]
;B[rb]
;W[rd]
;B[re]))
(;W[pc]
;B[ob]
;W[od]
;B[rc]))
(;W[cf]LB[cl:A]C[This stone develops the top and also prevents Black to capture A on a big scale.]))
(;W[cq]
(;B[bq]
;W[br]C[Is this dangerous? Not at first sight
Black seems to have more of an issue than White])
(;B[en]
;W[fp]C[Black doesn't have a base nor territory in the corner. Black is heavy.
Continuing]
;B[ci]C[Black can attack]
;W[el]C[But White has an easy defence]
;B[gn]
;W[cf]C[Now Who's attacking who?]))
(;W[en]
;B[dm]C[Black moves through the elephant eye and moreover with ideal haengma combination of knight & diagonal
I assume that you don't have these pruning techniques at your disposal. I think technique/choosing a move is a problem for you.]))
(;W[fp]SQ[fp][jq]C[Since the side stone is low, a high move makes sense here
Is this a thing you think about?]
;B[bp]
;W[cq]
;B[ck]C[I assume you have read out this variation as it is a well known pattern
I assume you rejected it because it feels too easy for Black
If we go a little further]
;W[ce]C[White CAN now leave the bottom alone and play the big corner point]
;B[jc]C[Black will likely play a move like yours earlier]
;W[qj]C[Upon which you can break up his largest area.
This is a perfectly fine game for White in my opinion.
But I assume you didn't read this far (I wouldn't have)]))